Graphic Review for Chubbuny: "Devil Beside Me"

Designer: chubbunny
Theme/Mood: Cute/Comedic
Reviewer: SapphireQueen


First Impression: 7/10

It's not bad! At first glance, the poster seems slightly messy.

 

Mood/Theme: 18.5/20

The cute/comedic theme was conveyed correctly through this poster; however, the red makes it more intense.
I would have used really hot pink instead :P

 

Pictures: 19/20

The pictures you chose are great for the theme. I know EXO barely has any good photoshoots, but for Sport Korea, I believe you could have chosen photos that were less serious. Baekhyun could have been sharpened more. Hyoyeon's fine :)

 

Fonts/Titles/Quotes/Credits: 15/20

I'm sorry but the font you used for "Devil Beside Me" was not the best choice ;) I would have used something more flirty. Again, the red seems really weird for me. I liked how you made D, B, and M blue though :)

The quote "Bring me back my love letter Baekhyun!" should stand out more and be changed into a font that is neater and more readable (eg, Bebas, Alegre Sans, Geosans). The credits seem to be the same for you (Orator right?) all the time so you can keep that.

 

Coloring: 7/10

The red. The coloring of the characters are fine, but since the background is red, you should chang the bg so it contrasts.

 

Technique: 13/20

Your cutting could be improved because jagged areas are obvious on the characters. You should make the character stand out more and maybe add an outline around the characters. The texture behind the characters looks really awkward and shabby. did you add a psd? that part was good. the original pictures would have been really ugly to just put them on xD There's lots of negative (red) space, so you could have moved the characters to the center maybe or something to fill it up. Overall, it's decent.

 

Score: 79.5/100

 

Bonus: 4/5

This is a pretty good piece :) If you have more to ask me, you can ask :3
Sorry if I seem strict. This is my first time reviewing and I don't want to screw it up OTL.

 

Overall Score: 83.5/105

 

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doctorbaek
#1
aw I saw this XD thank you ;u;