lol not really a fic but, i think it'd be a three shot ficlet???? 10k words or so hmm

right now its on the 4k mark and i promise that'd i'd post this.....soon? (i hope) if i quit you have every right to throw bricks at me. (i hope not) (fingers crossed)

Title: i knew you were trouble when you walked in (not sure lol)(i quoted a song jfc)

Summary: Candy Boy walks in the convenient store Taeyeon works at every Fridays and walks out with her heart.

(these are only parts of the fic)

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Taeyeon expected candy on the counter when she moved her book away but was only mildly surprised when she sees a

single can of coffee in front of her, water droplets falling from its sides, a sign that it’s been out of the freezer in a while. She stares at the can for moment and then at Candy Boy. It’s rude to stare but candy boy doesn’t usually buy canned coffee, she thinks. She tallies it up anyway. Candy boy pays and she reaches out for a bag just when-

                “No!—wait, I mean—uhm... you, you take it! I uh, it’s yours” 

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“If I get it right would I actually win a million dollars?”

“No, but you do get... something else.”

“What?”

“Me.”

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*so this is the fic in which jiyong has pink hair and dresses gangster-ish but really is just a shy 21 year old striving to make it big in the industry and maybe probably get the heart of cashier girl kim taeyeon. kim taeyeon is a tease, thinks too less yet thinks so much and works harder that anyone should. Everything is cheese and cheese and cheddar. Sweeter than all the candy jiyong buys every Fridays. I tried, ok, and everything is just disgustingly sweet and corny and warning: pick up lines. 

uhm i have to admit that the plot is not really that well developed yet and I'm still on the ??????? what happens next ??????? stages and and and the characterization is killing me slowly because no one ever told me characterizations would be this brain-frying and frustrating and i just want this fic to be /decent/ ok 

so yeah this will probably be finished by mid february or march........or april or may......lol. i have exams this month so...

please tell me what you think! ^^

don't be mean, i'd probably cry (no i'm kidding)

but just.....tell me what you think!!!! comment!!

inspire me, boost my spirits~~~~~~~~~

as of 2/10/13 update: 

wooP! finally at 6k mark. though now i doubt if it'll be 10k... i think that it's going to be longer??? that's good right? more gtae is always good gtae! and and anDD i finally finished the plot line draft so i'm expecting easier writing since i figured the plot out already. characterization is still hell though. I'm sorry jiyong. he's characterization is just blah, hopefully i can make work something out. *crosses fingers* lol wait, i just realized that i'm at the 6k mark yet i'm only half way l m a o well not exactly halfway maybe halfway point seventy-five yes.

expect this by march or if things go bad........april.

anyway, here's a little sneak peak~~

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                “Oh my god-“

                “Oh my god-“

                They both say at the same time. Jiyong’s more of amused shock and Taeyeon’s more of embarrassment.

                “You dyed your hair pink,” Jiyong says and that eating grin is on his face again and Taeyeon just wants to claw her eyes out or live in a cave away from humanity or Jiyong—mostly Jiyong—because this is the most embarrassing moment in her life so far (Besides that one time in 3^rd grade where she sang a duet with Jessica in one of the school’s programs. It was very bad and awkward and just, generally. bad.)

                “No I didn’t,” She denies, trying to save what’s left of her dignity, or if she’s making things worse for her, she doesn’t know. All she knows is that all she wants to do right know is die. Choking on a gummy bear and dying would’ve been less embarrassing than this.

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i'd put an emoji, but too lazy for emoji so have this :-)