[APP] Criminal Minds || Kim Raven (김레이벤)

 

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Criminal Minds Application

 

 

 Ulzzang Kim Jungyeon

 

Name: Kim Raven (김 레이벤)

 

Pairing: Sehun

 

Age: 18 y/o || July 7,1994

 

Nationality: Korean-American

 

Occupation: System Administrator for Microsoft Corp. New York (or anywhere that will fit your story line :p) - System Administrators are responsible for maintaining the computer systems of a company. Server management is a primary responsibility, and aSystem Administrator would be responsible for installing, maintaining and upgrading servers. They are alsoresponsible for ensuring the servers are backed up, and that the server data is secure from unauthorizedaccess. System administrators will also often perform light programming (usually scripting, which involveswriting programs to automate tasks).

 

Personality:

` She may look like one of those typical girls, but nah-uh! Don't judge the book by its cover. Behind thisdoll like facade, Raven is a person who doesn't talk much and has a hard time expressing on what she trullyfeels.  For strangers at first encounters , she may be described as the outgoing and friendly type of girlwho's very approachable and easy to talk to. BUT they got it wrong. For example when you greet herhappily and cheerfully. Expect not to receive your happy words back or see an offending smirk on herface. Why? If you can read her background I guess. You might understand the reason. She wouldn't talk toanyone unless they came from a high standing society or only if she likes to.  Haughty and Self-assuredwho's being described as a heartless being. With her blunt and laid back personality, you might have thewant to punch her directly on the face. But she doesn't care and WILL NEVER care.  Let's just accept thefact, that's the way she is anyways.

` Although Raven's always seen as the indifferent girl on the middle of the crowded happy feast. Because of her experiences , it's just her way to protect her sensitive part. You might be asking 'who isshe before?' So.. here. Lemme give you some short simple sentences. Raven, the girl who's easilyshattered. Raven, the girl who always blame herself to a fault. Raven, the meek, the humble and thesweetest. Raven the girl who never misses a day without laughing. If only she didn't received thatphone call and if someone can make her smile again. It will be great.

 

Background:

` Raven was born and is raised in New York , USA with her loving mother for the 18 years of her life(she's still fluent in both korean and english). With her responsible and supportive mom, she grew up withthe riches and the leisure everyone might want. But being the humble and meek girl, she doesn't boastanything she have to there. Raven and her mom was been living separately to her father and her twinbrother. At the age of 6 where the twins still doesn't know how the world and society goes. Their parentsseparated when her mom figured out that her father's cheating. She even caught her husband lying attheir own room's bed fully atop of his mistress.  Being professionals , they didn't fought infront of their children. The next is when the twins just saw their dad packing up his belongs with teary eyes. Heeven took Ray (her older twin) back to Seoul with him,while Raven's mother kept her. It was very heartthrobbing when Raven & Ray separated for the first time of their lives. And have never seen each other again.

` When Raven grew up, she was doing well both at home and school. Although her father's fault isn't very forgivable. Yes.. Raven's mom hated him but Raven never did. Raven even sends daily emails after every school for him and her twin, to say she and her mom is doing well and to ask them vise versa. etc.. Sometimes the twins can see each other after every month's which their mom never oppose because she understands.

` Raven skipped 4 year levelsbecause of her advance knowledge and intellect. Some used to bully and discriminate an asian halfling likeher but, butshe uses them as her inspirations just to improve with everything. With that, although she'sstill pursuing her studies some company's been already offering her a position reserved for the time shegraduate. But chose Microsoft, where she have the experience to work with her mom. Living her self independently and after receiving that news, she learned that she needed to be stronger. Because if shestays the way she is before she wouldn't be where she is right now.

`  The day she received a phonecall about her FATHER's death, Raven felt everything shuttering..Being one of the best System administrators for Microsoft. She was given the chance to flew to Koreaas the New York's representative for the Convention to be held at Seoul. A perfect chance for her investigation but it seems that the thoughts flew away after meeting that stranger. She found a new lifethat she learned to like and made her... Happy but now. *shrugs*.

 

Family Members :

Lothaire Kim/McKinley | 47 | Mother | Software Developer for Microsoft Corp. New York | She's supportive and very caring towards her daughter and son. | Alive

Kim HyunJun | 47 | Father | Former Microsoft Corp. Korea's head | He's a fun and reliable person. |Deceased

Kim 'Ray' HyunIl (C-Clown) | 18 | Older twin | A university student majoring in  Database administartion | He's very meek, reliable and a simple person. Pretty much alike the former Raven. |Missing doesn't have any specific information if he's dead or still breathing

 

How she met Sehun :

Inspried by Far away... Young love (click to listen)

*actually don't know! was inspired while listening to this ^^*

Without wasting anytime. She immediately flew her way to Korea not just to attend the Convention but for another purpose. Upon arriving she proceeds to the Hotel where it will be held. Being earlier than the expected meeting time. Raven decided to stroll around the place and reminisce about the past with her beloved father. In the middle of her drama, a youngman approach her offering his handkerchief. She wondered turning her head to the person. But noticing that her visions were getting blurry, at that moment she knew she was already crying. 

'It's free ..come on lady..take it~" the guy said.

Raven just stared at the thing and look away. "I'm fine " wipping her tears away.

The youngman kept his thing back and sighs. "O-kay~ I guess you're alright anyway" he was to turn her back when..

"Why'd you care?.." keeping her strong front.

He smiled turning back at her. "Uh~ I don't know.. maybe seeing a pretty lady sheding a tear makes me feel sad."

She frown looking at him. "Excuse me?"

He chuckled. "Nothing!" he change the topic. "If only I can make you feel better somehow?"

Raven was moved. "I'm sorry.."

With that she left leaving the youngman behind.

 

The Meeting already starts after a couple of minutes.

Raven and the others reperentatives were present.. sharing ideas and suggetions about their career world.

There was a debate happening. Tension is rising.. A youngboy stood up proudly defending his part. While raven give out her opinion.For hours, only the two of them kept on throwing such creative and bestest ideas which WOWed the others.

And finally, being the gentleman. he give the winning part to Raven. And raven smiled in victory.. The Convention ends amazingly.

 

The young man approach Raven to congratulate her.

"Never thought that you're such a tough girl Ms.Kim." offering his hands.

"Ofcourse~" she smirked at him shookinng hands with him. 

The youngman grins.  "Yeah~ after seeing you awhile ago."

"What're you bringing up? you weirdo"

The youngman shook his head. "Not weirdo.. It's Sehun.. wonderwoman~" he smiirked.

"Wonderwoman's nice but I'd prefer Raven." 

 

After the exchanging of names.. numbers followed. For a couple of minutes they were like super friends already. Before they seaparate ways there was already something sparks between their eyes .... Ravens visited her fathers remains having a light mood but never forgets to swear for a revenge infront of him.

Sehun on the other hand was now infront of his loving sweet screen monitor , doing some reseach about the girl who made him feel floating in the cloud nine right now. His jaw dropped while reading the informations.. 

"This can't be?!" he pulled his hair up. "Now I know why I feel like I've seen her before."

 

2 years ago...

" How much time left hyung?" He's busy browsing their victims profile while waiting for Suho to finished.

"10 minutes~" Suho stated peeping over the screen.

"Okay." he sighs then continues typing. 

After a few minutes. A window pops on the screen making Suho grin widely seeing the files they actually needed.

"Ow Sehun! You're the best!" he says Comanding the boy to open it. Sadly the passcode wouldn't work .. So that's why,.. That's why this old dead man besides them confidently told them the CODE without hesitation.. Hmph! Clever old Hag!.

The rooms door suddenly swung open. Revealing their other Companion. Baekhyun with some floppy disks , USBs and some CDs which seemed to be important.

"Everything's in voice command~" he says satting himself besides Sehun.

"Then how can we open it?" Suho angrily hissed. Baekhyun smiles handing a small device. 

"Hey! Hey! I think I know that! YA BYEON BAEKHYUN why did you broke in my room without permissions!?"

He stuck out his tongue "You maybe needing this right now.." Handed it over Sehun  then crosses his arms "If I didn't then.. what are those device made for.. Mr.Identity stealer~"

Suho just sighed "Stop it.." Sehun just smiled as Suho the device.. Which copies their victims voice within a minute.

"RAYVEN~"

Access Accepted

Says on the screen .. Browsing the needed info's they needed. A picture of two person's pops. It was a picture of Ray and Raven at a fountain infront of a garden~ Obviously not in KOREA.. Their ages musn't be that far away to Kai and Sehun..

"He's got a twin?" Baekhyun ask amazed

"I told you about it!" Sehun protested frowning.. The girl was beautiful.. He couldn't deny the fact.. They way her long sleek black hair danced at the wind and her happy expression made him somewhat... guilty?

"Sehun! Hurry and download the files! We need to leave as soon as possible.."

When they're done.. Sehun glanced at the deadman covered with blood all over the head..

"I'm sorry~" the last words he mumbles before they left..

 

It's almost a month since they started going out and became closer developing and confessing their feelings.. Sehun closed his eyes.. Clenching a fist, he punched the table which made everyone inside that restaurant look at him.. He didn't care.. He shouldn't be worrying about that anymore.. PAST is PAST. he says shooking his head . Until.. He heard a familiar voice.. The voice that makes his problems away.. A voice that makes him happy..  He knows it was his fault.. He's the reason why this precious woman changed.. She's his happiness.. If he ever do tell her that.. it was his and his brothers fault why Raven's father died and her twin got missing.. He wanted to be happy  and completely forgot everything... But he was wrong..

 

His past came haunting him back after receiving that phone call.. He loves her... with all his heart, he knows it was a bad idea at first.. To play with his feelings .. But she changed him.. She took him under her wings.. Gave him shelter , clothes and food to eat.. Shooking his head.. Sehun opened his laptop .. Typing something on it.. He smiled shooking his head before closing and leaving.. just like that..

Raven came back to the hotel room where she and Sehun was sharing only to see no traces of him.. Shrugging her shoulders.. She chuckled seeing the laptop open.. As soon as she opened it.. Her eyes widen in confusion.. Clenching her fist.. She went out running, looking for Sehun only to fail miserably..

Back On the screen :

 

Existing on your system may destroy you.. Corrupting everything makes me live as you suffer..
The way you ran flawlessly before makes me admire you.
Raven. I want you to delete me.
For I.
A Virus that can easily be removed will turn everything back to normal again.
I love you Raven and this would be the last things I want to say. ciao~
 
P.S : Do not download the same malicious file that may harm you again.
 
-Sehun

 

 

 


 

Phew! I hope this is good enough.. I’m sorry if it is kinda boring but I tried my best... Oh! and before else, please feel free to change anything if you want... Good luck again! :D

 

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PlanetExotic
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It's not as confusing before, which is a lot better! But please remember that Sehun is only 18, meaning that five years ago, he was only 13, and falling in love at 13 is a little... iffy. But still, I like the application, and the ending message he left here was actually very clever! Thank you for applying!