It's a good poster! But the glitter/dot is a bit too much. The yellow also stops awkwardly in the middle and the top, which doesn't balance the poster very well. It's also covering much of his face, and it makes the picture seem low quality. He's placed a bit too far tothe left, and the flow from red to yellow isn't very neat and crisp.
There's also that weird sliver on the rightside which I'm guessing you forgot to enlarge the texture enough to cover it up, or you didn't realize it didn't cover that part.
Your font for Best fits the background, but it's too poppy for me. Also,tube white is distracting and doesn't bring the poster together nicely. Since in your credit ther was a random red word, you can switch the white to red, and then have the splatters underneath be a burgundy red color.
The old picture texture you put over it all makes the poster look rough, not flowy. Maybe take it out and darken the glitter texture.
I never really get movie credits in posters...
But this is great nonetheless, and very creative!
OkAy so here's the things.
Basically, I have this rule where text cannot take up that much of the poster. And right now, your text is already taking up 1/3 of this poster.
In all honesty, I don't see the need for actually making this a movie type poster. It would be much more elegant if you just dropped the black backdrop down about another inch and put the watermark at the very bottom.
Then you can enlarge the title a few more sizes so it actually is balanced with Baekhyun. That's him right? /sorry. still can't memorize EXO. SLKJFKLSDf
Like Baekyy is drifting off to the side. OHH! And leave the title black. It will look more sophisticated in just black.
Then add a layer mask to Baekhyun, change the contrast of him just a smidge so he stands out more. Then add a layer mask to the texture on top, move it to the side a bit because of that one part on the right that is sticking out texture-less.
Erase a bit of that yellowness because it is overpowering the character. Like, there's a bit to much yellow glitter stuff.
OK. THERE'S MY ADVICE. SORRY FOR THE INTRUSION. I'M CHECKING YOUR SHOP OUT.
Hey this is a great job! But i think it would be even nicer if there was a second character that's positioned back to back with Minhyuk. It would make the whole poster more surreal and captivating :) Hope to see more of your works!! ^^
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