losing it

wrtinig an essay for english and getting completely confused and insecure with my sentences.

 

not so sure if writing

"While everyone and there mammas getting accused and executed, John Proctor...."

would be appropriate...

it i might just....it sounds better than anything else i can think of

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shineendbigbang4ever #1
Wow. I'm learning the same thing in school.
Laymedowninabedofexo #2
*their

mommas *are
LadyVamp #3
Someone's writing about the Crucible..., :) lol While that statement is accurate, try something more eloquent sounding. For example: While many of Salem's citizens were being wrongly incriminated and executed, John Procter...,

Good luck with the essay. It's been ages since I had to read that play.
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