So I tried to write a rap--
song sort of. The chorus is sung normally (refer to Bang Yong Guk's I remember, Turbo's Hwesung {December})
I sort of have the number of beats for it though I'm not sure how many it is (Oh dear...)
This is here because I want to see the response from my pals (and subs) before I post it on Wattpad which is where I post a lot of my lyrics.
The chorus is in orange and the verses are in green.
There is no title btw
The little butterflies,
spread their little lies.
In this masquerade,
which is just a facade.
That special monarchy,
is only a trickery,
People don't understand,
all of the reality.
The truth that they see,
but it can't be conceived.
Cos it's all just the rumors,
of the conspiracy.
It's better to run,
but not run the world.
Stay away from Oz,
if you don't wanna get hurt.
Why are you trying to get by,
while you're under control.
Cos they're deceiving,
while you're pleasing.
Those you do not know.
If you up up your eyes,
You can free your mind.
To the truth they won't show.
Don't give in to the temptations,
to be the next sensation.
Cos it ain't worth your soul, (your soul)
I don't know Kim Noble,
But what happened to her aint noble.
People must be blind,
to be using just one eye.
Now you see the numbers,
triple threats in clusters.
They were everywhere for Disney,
Who's in the same hood as Jay-Z.
I shouldn't say their names,
but these folk are insane.
When you see the signs,
that are slowly defined.
Better not get into the scene,
In case you become something,
with your limbs tied up by strings.
Why are you trying to get by,
while you're under control.
Cos they're deceiving,
while you're pleasing.
Those you do not know.
If you up up your eyes,
You can free your mind.
To the truth they won't show.
Don't give in to the temptations,
to be the next sensation.
Cos it ain't worth your soul, (your soul)
I'm a noob to writing rap lyrics so I'm not that good at it yet (LOL?)
Somehow I feel these are too controversial
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