Advice~

Hi guys~ I'll be asking for help/advice/comment/opinion on this poster. It's actually one of my finals for my major subject. XD The other one's a Kpop newsletter but I can only do it in school because I don't have indesign~ =_= Anyway, help me in things I have to improve. This is actually my 3rd attempt because my first ones are supposed to be angst, but I didn't like it~ XD I maintained the polaroids of the previous ones, hence those photos~ XD I need words of advice from anyone who's willing to criticize my work. Please be specific in pointing out because it will be of great help~ =v= If you also have suggestions for titles/quotes please do so since I making them. XD Ignore the names of the credits~ XD Random names popped in my mind~ XD

 

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chocolate #1
Use another photo of you. This one is a little bit turn off since it looks like you are trying to aegyo. It does not match with your concept of more than an idol-fan relationship cause if I am an idol I won't like to have a girlfriend who acts and tries to be cute.
The poster was really bad. You surrounded the poster with Kris' photos. It's too much. You can use one or two photos of him, like a representation of Kris' split personality, on stage and off cam. The positioning of the photos was also a mess.
The advertisement part is also a bit off. The audience thingy is not matched with the advertisement. Why? Because that audience thingy type matches for concerts promotions.
Use another font and font size, too.
Also, before you use a photo editing software, study it first. So that you will know how to properly use it. The flaws is clearly seen.
Don't use dark colors for it makes the poster looks boring.
amalia91 #2
Hello, I will just point out some things...
1. The quality of your poster. Is bad. You can't use this quality for a final test or what you need to present...
2. Even though I can't see clearly, the girl isn't cut well. I don't know what program you use, but on Photoshop you can use the lasso tool or magic wand tool... depends how it helps your picture.
3. You can always try something else for your title and subtitle... other font. This is a bit boring for a poster that shows brightness and love ...etc...
btw, you can always download InDesign from torrents or simply search on google. It takes time and some other things, but I am sure you can find it. Fighting ^^
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