Title : Wedding Tears

Author : inspiritb2uty

Story Review by MinnieAh/Albino of { ::Marshmallow Hedgehog:: }

Title - 5/5

The title really fits the story! ^_^

Foreword / Description - 9/10

I really like the description and foreword, it tells me many things~

Plot - 18/20

It is a relatively new plot, I haven't seen anything like this anywhere.

Grammar - 22/25

Hardly any mistakes in the grammar, just some punctuation probelm.

Flow - 10/10

I like the flow of the story and nothing wrong.

Enjoyment - 9/10

I really enjoy the story! Though it made me cry.

Appearance - 9/10

Clean and neat, easy to read. Paragraphs are in place!

Characters - 9/10

I like how you write the characters, it gave me a different view.

Total - 91/100

^_^ Good~ Hwaiting!