Title [3/5]

Title is eye catching, but not enough for me to read.

Foreword / Description [10/10]

Graphics [5/5]

Graphic fits extremely well with story. Full points.

Originality [26/30]

Pretty original to me.

Storyline [28/30]

Good storyline.

Grammar / Spelling [17/20]

The grammar and spelling was good! Even though here and there was some problems.

Speed / Flow of Story [13/15]

It was a good pace.

Writing Style / Neatness [15/15]

I like your writing style and neatness. Full points.
 

Characterization [9/10]

The characters fit well and you gave a good description of them.
 

Overall Enjoyment / Captivity [8/10]

It was good. Even though I don't personally like pirate fan fiction.
 

Total [134/150]

Good job! c: