yay my older sister finally made a story her username is NeverEnding, i hope you can just  look at it and give your statement on what you think. my sister has been a longer writer then me but i think the tables have turned :) 

The story is called: 100% Mommy + 10% Daddies= Absolutely Bad 

You are a goody 2 shoes with a sharp tongue and a short temper. You don’t go out with bad boys nor do you get involved with them but you can’t help but love Teen Top the schools leaders. When you go to confess your love to them they treat you like dirt and throw away your hand made chocolates that took you hours to make. You now completely hate them and never want to see or talk to them again but not till you’re paired up with them for a school project do you have to talk to them. Outraged, you want to change partners but since there are no more girls left for teen top to have you have no choice. How will this work for you? And will the boys help out with the baby?
 

so just give it a try ok :)