Title (4/5)

The title is unique and really displays your story well. It really grabbed my attention and makes me want to click and read it. Good Job!

Appearance (2/5)

I like your poster but, Don't take it the wrong way. Don't you think that the poster seems a little simple and ordinary? A good story like this deserves a poster worth drooling for. But despite that, it shows off the mood of the story well and the over-all cutesy/ romance feel to it is in there as well. Nice work. Oh and another thing, Can you give a background to your story as well? Make it colorful. :D

Description / Foreword (13/15)

2 words: Short and Sweet. Its elegant, concise and really gives off a mysterious air for your story. Great job on giving off a Description that lets the viewers know what your story is about and yet doesn't blow the story away. Nice Job and Keep it up! Your an author worth subscribing to.

Originality 20/25)

Although I don't really much read GD/CL Fic pairings, this one really seems to make me change my mind. Its Unique and I really love the way you portray the characters well. You make the chemistry between CL and GD in the story really spicy and Fun.

Characters/Storyline (7/10)

Like I said on top, You really describe the characters well. Since you've only posted up one chapter, I really can't say anymore but keep up what your doing and Nice work.

Writing (17/20)

I admire the way you write. You arrange your thoughts well and you don't confuse the readers with too much interaction. Despite some minor errors, I really have to say good job. Add more chapters though. I'm wondering what you have in store for us. :)

Flow (7/10)

Great chemistry, Great flow. Nice work.

Overall Enjoyment (7/10)

I really had fun reading your story. Although its still too early to tell if this story is Daebak or what, the story shows potential. Great potential. And I'm gonna give a round applause to the author who wrote it.

Total: 77/100

B Grade