LOL kinda REALLY need your help on this my fellow writers.

Im working on Two fics now. FALLEN* & LOVE, JOY, OR JUST ANOTHER PLEASURE TOY.

On the fanfic "FALLEN*" i have a co-author..... (she stays anonymous)(untill she wants to be revealed) .... and we working really hard on this book. litarally writing pieces of this book every single night. Now the strange thing is... People seem to be more interested in "LOVE, JOY, OR JUST ANOTHER PLEASURE TOY" ..... PLEASE CAN ANYONE TELL ME WHY??? lol. I'm going to update soon on my Fallen* but i want to know... what i must change in this book? If its the and parts... aish we ARE GETTING THERE PEOPLE. But if yall need it sooner... I'll start by adding some in next chapter, not though... too early 4 that, but scenes.

PLEASE MY FELLOW WRITERS I NEED YUR HELP ON THIS ^^

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Alex_the_K #1 Apr 23, 2012 10:55:30

The story is just starting, so chill :) It's good so far and while the English is just a little bit off, it's actually quite well done ^_^ Just remember to develop your characters a bit more... and no need to rush to the parts until you're ready!!