Technically, it is chapter 20. I've been seriously off lately. Need to get back on track! That's what I always say... Hence I'm behind by what, four chapters? Sigh... I rarely come on here anymore. To write that is. Alright. No dillydallying! 

Hold up, hold up. Am I missing something here? Because I really feel like I am. First off, Tiffany's way with words is commendable. She has a way to tweak facts and make everything sound so... honeyed. I don't know how to describe it, but the way she talks - she has wit. And a lot of it. She might or might not be hiding something. Until now, I'm not very sure. But there's a gut feeling that tells me she's a quiet sort of evil. You know, the kind that hides everything at first, plans everything in her head, and when she actually executes it, it unravels very, very scarily. Or maybe it's just me and my imagination. Changmin's intimidated by her, but only because he's off his game. I think the whole team-falling-apart and quarrels with Vic has taken its toll on the guy. Poor thing. Also, what's up with the whole father thing? Is his father like some kind of big shot police officer and in Tiffany's (very crudely and cruelly put, I must add) words, Changmin isn't as good as him? But then, why did he suddenly say that they wouldn't suspect Tiffany anymore? 

God. Changmin has lost his mind! He's become a total demon, a bastard, and a dictator! What an . Seriously, if I were Yoona, I'd stomp right over, give him a piece of my mind and slap the out of him! I mean, of course he's the Team Leader and all, but that doesn't give him the right to order others to do things. That's just... that's just wrong! Plain wrong. He's changed so much lately, it scares me. The team really needs to get back together properly. Kyuhyun's awesome. I mean, he observes, and he gets everything. Like, he's the one that actually makes sense. Yoona's still a little on the follow-orders side, while Minho's just too... Hmm, I don't know about Minho. He's hard to decipher. And the last line, about responsibilities. /saves the line forever. It's so epic. Coming from Kyuhyun, it's like a huge blow to Changmin's pride. But yeah, he's dumb and he needs a wake-up call. Minho's with Vic, isn't he? I wonder how he's doing...

I quote Sir Thomas Browne. Women do most delight in revenge. It's driving Victoria mad! There she goes, swayed by her emotions and her need for vengeance so much that she's deluded into trying to beat Changmin, instead of solving the case. Oh ho ho, they're never going to get anywhere with this. But the way she says it, I'd be laughing. I mean she sounds so cute. I know you meant for her to sound like a revenge-driven maniac but yeah... I can't really imagine that haha. Something tells me this isn't the worst part. Candy! You better have a serious showdown for me soon! I wanna see some action. BOO YEAH. This is the chizz I'm talking about people. Face to face ChangToria argument... heh heh. Drama's always good.

For the interrogations I'm not going to have like super long paragraphs. It might even be squished into one gigantic paragraph. Hehe. Now. Luna. I feel sad for her. She hasn't done wrong, but what she knows will hurt her if she doesn't tell. I would be too. Interrogations are scary, after all. And she's probably never ever been involved in such things before. Must be so stressful for her. Yoona's doing well on her own, trying to do what Victoria does best - profiling; and I'm sure she'll be pretty good. I expect nothing less, anyway. 

Yeah okay now Vicky's just going bonkers. Crazy woman. It's not doing anything. And her assuming herself as the team leader of the two isn't going to help either. Minho has abilities. Vic's sass is unecessary, as much as it amuses me. Does Ryeowook really like Luna or something? I can't remember much about them. Didn't really pay attention. But what Victoria said is true... No one isn't suspected. Ah... she's letting her feelings go to her head and screw her thoughts up. Sigh.

Oh. Ryeowook's Luna's boyfriend. Whoops! Hyorin seems like a very headstrong character. Stubborn, maybe. And... what's the word... indifferent? Well, she's got her priorities straight, I think. But she's a serious careerwoman. Seems to place her job before her relationships. She's gonna be a tough nut to crack, Hyorin is. Mhm. And anyway, she's making an assumption here. Just because Leeteuk talks to Luna a lot, doesn't mean she could be a main suspect. Maybe she's just covering for something more...

... Changmin. (end of comment)

Now what? His pride. What's next. I don't like Tiffany here. She's messing everything up, but then again, kinda puts him on the right track at the same time. To keep up that pride (insert dramatic rolling of eyes here), he has to help Yoona and Kyuhyun with the investigations so he doesn't seem like a bad police officer in Tiffany's eyes. And I sense him going to overwork YoonKyu... Poor kids. 

I don't believe Onew has anything to do with the murder, even though he may seem a little distant. I mean, he seems good. Kind of. But I can't really tell. Also, I think the only reason why the replies vary is because Hyorin has a really rigid personality, and she just says what she assumes. While Onew states facts, and he would know better because he's Leeteuk's doctor. Hyorin just... I think she's just biased or whatever. Or it could be that she just wants to take over the hospital and this tiny (in her eyes) murder shouldn't be getting in her way. Personal opinion here. And also, everyone portrays things differently. No two people think alike. 

Okay, first. Candy, did you really have to bring the concept of light into this? Geez. Science irks me. And second, I freaking love how Kyuhyun always renders Changmin speechless! My sentiments exactly, Kyuhyun. Stupid Changmin doesn't know how to appreciate Yoona for trying her best even though she knows that the only reason why she's working soooo hard is because the two oldest ones don't want to back off of each other. It's so dumb, this whole fight thing. Yoona and Kyuhyun's friendship strengthen though - that's the only good thing that comes out of this. They work together well. Kind of. I still like KyuToria together though. Hehe. They're funny. YoonKyu are just cute. Hehe... 

I stopped at the that would explain everything part. My first reaction: NUUUUUU ;u; MY TAETEUK HEART. WAEEEEE?! My second reaction: Eff you, Hyorin, eff you eff you eff you. Then, after thinking through everything... Yeah, I guess that would explain everything. However, in order for her to be so good at lying about everything, I think they must've stopped the affair before Leeteuk got murdered. Or something. Maybe she ended it. Okay, I'mma read more now. /done reading. So wait, Tiffany and Leeteuk quarrelled. AHA! I knew something was up with that woman. Also, the insomnia thing really confuses me. I mean, I'm sure he didn't purposely admit himself to the hospital... Or did he just do that because he wanted to continue his affair with Hyorin without Taeyeon suspecting a thing? MAYBE he wanted to, you know, 'commit adultery' - lol let's just quote Yoona here - without Taeyeon knowing. Hmm. My imagination again. Haha. But I like Luna. She's honest and down to earth. But somehow I think she might be in trouble... Like, attacked or something...

Awwwww. Minho being left alone. Where's the romance, Candy? I crave some MinYoon action! I love MinToria. I mean it's like there Victoria goes, prattling on and on and on about how Changmin's so stupid (when actually, she totally is in love with him - or at least, I like to think that) and Minho's there laughing his off (in his head). They're cute. I can imagine them like this. Nearing the end, Vic's hate for Changmin kind of dissolves a little. It's childish, really. Very childish. I have absolutely nothing else to say. Kim Hyorin being attacked... I'm not surprised. Mmhmm. I just wanted to say... Yoona's doing really, really unexpectedly well. She's progressing the most in the team. I'm very proud of her. Minho's just being his usual self. The boy's always good. :)

Phew. That was a long chapter. I'd love to beta the next chapter, but I'm dead tired. Some other time maybe. 

officially beta'd.