Hate+Hate=(L.O.V.E)^2[REVIEW REQUESTED BY THE AUTHOR]
STORY
wait! Lemme read it again...there, i read it.
I'd like to point out a few things.
*ONE: It needs more details. Such as setting,how their faces look and stuffs.
*TWO: A few errors. Such as spelling,capitalization and stuffs.
THREE: Some words were missing. I think you were too focused on getting your ideas on ink and somehow you skipped those words.(intentional or not.) that was in the latter part of the 2nd chapter.
Other than that it was great! Keep up with the plot and wish you the best in this fic!
this is my first review and i'm looking foward to the end! Kamsamnida!
wait! Lemme read it again...there, i read it.
I'd like to point out a few things.
*ONE: It needs more details. Such as setting,how their faces look and stuffs.
*TWO: A few errors. Such as spelling,capitalization and stuffs.
THREE: Some words were missing. I think you were too focused on getting your ideas on ink and somehow you skipped those words.(intentional or not.) that was in the latter part of the 2nd chapter.
Other than that it was great! Keep up with the plot and wish you the best in this fic!
this is my first review and i'm looking foward to the end! Kamsamnida!
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