Ahhh, I love the vibes I'm getting. I honestly missed your writing so much, it's been too long my friend.

I love the atmosphere you set - a guttering street light, an empty street, a disused alley choked with weeds, a chained gate, wind and sleet and little puddles of slushy ice.

Very dark and haunting. Really sets the scene for further events.

The pace is slow, but it's menacing. I love it. The juxtaposition of Seungyoon's and Minho's POV is jarring (in a good way) and really brings the chapter together. You know this one is going to be dangerous.

The final paragraph really sealed it for me. Amazing work. I also love the fact that you didn't mention anyone's names throughout the chapter. To keep people guessing, I imagine.