Thank you for Reviewing!! Magic Shop Advertisements and Review: So show me(I'll show you)

I just want to thank Crazy4BTS for the awesome review of my story Bittersweet! I honestly didn't think the review would be chapter by chapter so that was a big plus for me since it gave me a sense of how I progressed in my writing as the chapters continued. 

I'm glad you pointed out how I needed to improve on my grammar mistakes especially in the beginning of the story. I do realize that I usually get too excited on starting my fics or just uploading the chapters that I don't review them before uploading lol So I'll definitely start taking my time on them to fix these mistakes :) Also the comment on maybe merging some chapters is definitely something I've thought of doing since some small chapters I wrote were small because I had little time to write and I was just too excited to wait longer to upload. I can be quite impatient and sometimes feel a little bad that I make my readers wait so long lol

Anyways, I'm super happy with the review and absolutely adored the comments you made on the story plot as you read the chapters! It's fun to read your reaction as a reader as well as a reviewer :) 

Anyone whose looking for someone to review their story should definitely check out Magic Shop Advertisements and Review: So show me(I'll show you)

 

Thank you again!!

-AoifeCross

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