so i just started this story and i need your help in seeing if the first chapter is good. the story is about brother complex and meeting bad boys (i know cliche, but those type of stories are my secret pleasure) SO I WOULD APPRECIATE THE HELP!!! *bow* pleaaaaaaasssseeeeeee *-*""""

link:

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1298946/brother-complex-a-bts-fan-fiction-bts