hi everyone i'm currently stuck in 3 soon finished oneshots; one with nct's johnny x chittaphon, one with zion.t x crush and one with seo chulgoo x olltii

is anyone willing to proofread what i've written and give feedback / give me some ideas on how to make it better?

i've been on a writing block for like soon a year now and i think it's time to get my out when i've written so much ah

tell me and i'll send document links to yall! ily all <33