ILARIA Multishop - Review of FORBIDDEN

I would really like to thank ILARIA Multishop for the review of my baby, Forbidden. Especially MakneaKissMe, who took the time to read all 14 chapters and then wrote a very insightful review of them (that you can find here). Every comment on the smallest details helped me a lot and I think I'll be able to improve by applying the advice I was given.

Overall, I really appreciate the work they're doing at ILARIA, and the time frame in which my request was taken and complete was really great!

You can find them here: They do a lot of things: graphics, trailers, review/beta reading and there are a lot of staff to request from! They're kind of busy right now, but I think it's worth waiting a little for the service!

Again, thank you ILARIA Multishop and a special thanks to MakneaKissMe!

xoxo

Joorin.

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shinee02 #1 Dec 20, 2016 11:22:15

I've read the review and I've gotta admit that I've learned a lot from the tips the author placed here and there (even if I'm not a writer myself). It just made me see some techniques that some authors used so us readers would understand the story more and not get lost in the flow-- basically to have a good reading experience. I've learned new things today :)

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Hwaiting~