new fic idea!! (aka preview of my new fic y'all) + review shop advice?
1 ❈ i found out recently there was drama for some authors over on ask.fm. i'm glad my ask.fm was kept relatively drama-free haha, even tho i did see my name mentioned in other people's ask.fm a few times and was like o__o???
bc i'm usually so clueless over anything that's not in my little "aff bubble" lol. (i only go on aff to post updates and reply to messages i get/talk to my readers orz. i don't even read any fics on aff anymore aside from going to poster shops to request pretty posters for my stories xD).
it just made me think like, 'wow, it's been awhile since you've gotten hate messages/drama, reyna!! way to go!!' (watch me posting this = jinxing myself and the hate messages come again xD). but i mean. i'm generally so quiet nowadays so ;afjsafa i hope the haters will continue to leave me alone haha >__>
2 ❈ anyways the main point of this post is to tell y'all... I HAVE A NEW FIC IDEA!! and i wanna post it up so badly a;lfdjsa
actually i have 2 fic ideas: one chaptered and one oneshot. i can't post up the oneshot until i complete it (which... might take awhile.... since it'll be a long oneshot Dx), but i'm very excited for my chaptered fic idea!!
the idea is.... for the first time in a pcyosh story... a non-modern au!! aka prince au. yes. you read that right. it's a "prince and commoner" au~
the sypnosis is, kai is the crown prince of their country, who had an attempted assassination made on his life while going hunting. he managed to run away on his horse, but was severely injured and ended up lost in a remote village far off the coast of the city. sehun is a poor villager who saw him, brought him home, and patched him up. thus began the (angsty) love story between them.
here's a snippet i've written (imagine sehun looking like he did in his w korea photoshoot):
“Are you going to stand there like a lump the whole time?”
Jongin winces, dropping down to sit beside Sehun on the ground. “Well, if I don’t want to be called Useless Nini the whole time, I better learn how to wash clothes from watching you firsthand, right?”
Sehun only giggles, turning back to the fabric in his hold. His hands and arms are drenched with soap and water as he crouches over the riverbank, eyes concentrated on washing the piece of cloth, a tip of the tongue poking out unconsciously as the gentle breeze ruffles his messy hair, and Jongin watches.
Jongin watches him, and wonders.
Because Sehun isn’t wearing the finest garment, specially-tailored by the best couturier in the country. His face isn’t lavished with blush and make-up and many other embellishments Jongin’s seen on the faces of countless young ladies whenever his father throws a Royal Ball.
Sehun is just… in a simple skyblue cotton tunic, face clear and fresh with a few water droplets sliding down his cheeks from the splashings, and he’s bent down washing clothes by hand at the riverbank, for god’s sake, and yet―
Yet, Sehun is the most beautiful person Jongin has ever seen.
More than the daughter of the Minister. More than the Princess of their neighboring country. More than anyone who’s tried to dress up to impress the Crown Prince Kai of Exordium, a year away from ascending the throne, a year away from being King of this very country himself―
And Jongin, for the first time, wonders what will make him more happy.
What is most important to him.
it'll be a sweet, melodrama angsty story. aka my fave type to write~ (think NRSB/FD... but without the mpreg lmao) i want to start it so badly but when is a good time to post it ahhhh. after destinare is done? or do i just say it and post it anyways bc none of my other stories are close to completion anytime soon >.<;;
what do you think of this idea so far tho? like it? would you want to read it? :-D
3 ❈ one last thing... this is smthn i've been debating on for a long time...
so you know how i get very insecure about my writings, right? like, i think my stories are never good enough :-( i've been wanting to hear an unbiased thought of helpful, detailed review with criticisms about my writing and what i can do to improve and stuff...
i think review shops are best for that? does anyone know of any good review shops i can request from? or is there anyone willing to give me constructive criticisms on my stories? be mean. be blunt. point out things you don't like. stuff like that ;; i won't mind lol.
umn. that's all, i think. once again my blog post is as long as a river lol. but ya, tell me your thoughts. esp on the new fic idea!! ^^
(also whispers i've been updating SO MUCH in just one week--SR/LR/destinare/FD--that idk what to update next anymore lolz xD hmn what should i write next~~)
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