new fic idea!! (aka preview of my new fic y'all) + review shop advice?

 

1 ❈ i found out recently there was drama for some authors over on ask.fm. i'm glad my ask.fm was kept relatively drama-free haha, even tho i did see my name mentioned in other people's ask.fm a few times and was like o__o???

bc i'm usually so clueless over anything that's not in my little "aff bubble" lol. (i only go on aff to post updates and reply to messages i get/talk to my readers orz. i don't even read any fics on aff anymore aside from going to poster shops to request pretty posters for my stories xD).

it just made me think like, 'wow, it's been awhile since you've gotten hate messages/drama, reyna!! way to go!!' (watch me posting this = jinxing myself and the hate messages come again xD). but i mean. i'm generally so quiet nowadays so ;afjsafa i hope the haters will continue to leave me alone haha >__>

 

2 ❈ anyways the main point of this post is to tell y'all... I HAVE A NEW FIC IDEA!! and i wanna post it up so badly a;lfdjsa

actually i have 2 fic ideas: one chaptered and one oneshot. i can't post up the oneshot until i complete it (which... might take awhile.... since it'll be a long oneshot Dx), but i'm very excited for my chaptered fic idea!!

the idea is.... for the first time in a pcyosh story... a non-modern au!! aka prince au. yes. you read that right. it's a "prince and commoner" au~

the sypnosis is, kai is the crown prince of their country, who had an attempted assassination made on his life while going hunting. he managed to run away on his horse, but was severely injured and ended up lost in a remote village far off the coast of the city. sehun is a poor villager who saw him, brought him home, and patched him up. thus began the (angsty) love story between them.

here's a snippet i've written (imagine sehun looking like he did in his w korea photoshoot):

 

“Are you going to stand there like a lump the whole time?”

Jongin winces, dropping down to sit beside Sehun on the ground. “Well, if I don’t want to be called Useless Nini the whole time, I better learn how to wash clothes from watching you firsthand, right?”

Sehun only giggles, turning back to the fabric in his hold. His hands and arms are drenched with soap and water as he crouches over the riverbank, eyes concentrated on washing the piece of cloth, a tip of the tongue poking out unconsciously as the gentle breeze ruffles his messy hair, and Jongin watches.

Jongin watches him, and wonders.

Because Sehun isn’t wearing the finest garment, specially-tailored by the best couturier in the country. His face isn’t lavished with blush and make-up and many other embellishments Jongin’s seen on the faces of countless young ladies whenever his father throws a Royal Ball.

Sehun is just… in a simple skyblue cotton tunic, face clear and fresh with a few water droplets sliding down his cheeks from the splashings, and he’s bent down washing clothes by hand at the riverbank, for god’s sake, and yet―

Yet, Sehun is the most beautiful person Jongin has ever seen.

More than the daughter of the Minister. More than the Princess of their neighboring country. More than anyone who’s tried to dress up to impress the Crown Prince Kai of Exordium, a year away from ascending the throne, a year away from being King of this very country himself―

And Jongin, for the first time, wonders what will make him more happy.

What is most important to him.

 

it'll be a sweet, melodrama angsty story. aka my fave type to write~ (think NRSB/FD... but without the mpreg lmao) i want to start it so badly but when is a good time to post it ahhhh. after destinare is done? or do i just say it and post it anyways bc none of my other stories are close to completion anytime soon >.<;;

what do you think of this idea so far tho? like it? would you want to read it? :-D

 

3 ❈ one last thing... this is smthn i've been debating on for a long time...

so you know how i get very insecure about my writings, right? like, i think my stories are never good enough :-( i've been wanting to hear an unbiased thought of helpful, detailed review with criticisms about my writing and what i can do to improve and stuff...

i think review shops are best for that? does anyone know of any good review shops i can request from? or is there anyone willing to give me constructive criticisms on my stories? be mean. be blunt. point out things you don't like. stuff like that ;; i won't mind lol.

 

 

umn. that's all, i think. once again my blog post is as long as a river lol. but ya, tell me your thoughts. esp on the new fic idea!! ^^

(also whispers i've been updating SO MUCH in just one week--SR/LR/destinare/FD--that idk what to update next anymore lolz xD hmn what should i write next~~)

 

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Babysevenohx #1
I love #2! And for #3 I think if you reach out to fellow writers that you admire on AFF that'll be your best chance I don't want random shops to be ripping off your work ;;
evaporous
#2
Awww I think the new fic is a great idea, and I know that Paper Heart gives good reviews, basically just poke around the tags for reviews or reviewshop, and look through the shop's previous reviews to see how good they are? :D
shubhada #3
Hey pcyosh..you know what I love the fics you write..and I think you should just write anything...and lt ll be great.. And nrsb and FD type fics are epic..there is drama angst..and the angst associated with pregnancy... It's always worth reading your fics..love you:)
porthos
#4
I loooooove the idea of the new fic and the little preview you posted omg. *_* You know NRSB/FD are my fave kind of fics... saiofhadisofhasiofdhf I seriously can't wait. So uh, I say post it as soon as you're ready to!!
sehunsmells
#5
I LOVED SEHUNS SHOOT especially when he wore the white shirt hnnnng but ye dude choosing love or ur country/kingdom is always angsty especially if he chooses his duty BAHHAHA
tulips-n-roses
#6
tbh the last thing i read for you was Love Dealer and i was pretty active there but then things happened and i stopped reading kaihun tho i never unsubscribed to you because you simply have a very good talent.
Even before i'd started reading LD i had promised myself i won't read anymore kaihun i was literally SO DONE with it. But when i stumbled on LD i thought: 'i know i said i won't read anymore kaihun but daaayuuum this is something i just gotta read' you literally made a kaihun anti-fan read a kaihun fic. Imagine.
My point is, you'll never be satisfied with what you write because you wrote it, humans are made to always want more, it's our nature. So it's okay if you're insecure, as long as you accept your writing, everyone else will. Just don't think about it. Don't proofread a gazillion time because trust me, a fic having one or two typos is way better than a 'perfect' fic. Prefect is so overrated anyway.

One thing I feel you should try to work on tho, (and this is something I shouldn't be talking about because I do pretty much the same anyway lmao) try changing you writing ships every once in a while, I see you wrote ChanHun? That's pretty awesome but have you ever thought of an ot12 fic where you give yourself the chance to write about more than just one or two ships? it's actually very fun and interesting, try it out.
I'm sorry this is so freaking long GAWD! I just felt like I owed you my honest opinion because you're a very great person and just a rare type of authors here on aff. <3
P.S.: I'm planning on finishing Love Killer and Love Redeemer because God damn i just can't get enough of that au!
Cloe53 #7
Ah I forgot to add how I need you to start because then you have written all my favourite aus
Cloe53 #8
START, I need you to start, please!!! (Lol I'm kidding no pressure, update when you want but I would like it if you do X ) and unfortunately I'm not unbiased and able to give criticism because ily but I understand why you would want it xxx
EsSehunWifey94
#9
I like your new fic idea,will you just post it now plizzzz
eeziic #10
Yessssss! Prince-commoner!au is the one i have been searching bcs i only found one that satisfies my taste and one from you will be perfect. I cant wait for thisssss (and the angst and fluff and drama and more sekaiii of course) ^^ im looking forward for the oneshot too. Way to go babe ;)))
bloodyhotcheetos #11
The new idea sounds amaaazingggg!! I can't wait to see everything unfold since it sounds so interesting already >< I would totally be up to give constructive criticism...but I can't find any flaws ^^" I'll be on the look out though! Fighting, Author-nim!
IWillRegretitall #12
I just started the whole concept of writing with my nabies Sekai and I wish I find someone who give a constructive feedback for me. However, the new fic idea sounds awesome and promising. Fighting.
kassia
#13
OMG IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOR SOOO LONG I LOVE HISTORICAL AUs AND I'LL PROBABLY LOVE THEM EVEN MORE IF YOU WERE THE AUTHOR!!! as;jflskhf;sdj plleeeeaaaasseeee updatteeeeeeee. sry if I'm really rude, but pls don't wait until you've finished Destine :( I wanna read this fic :((( anwyayssss I CANT WAIT. LOVING THE SHORT EXCERPT ALREADY XDDDDD
redrobbitsin
#14
i'm iiiiiinnnnnnnn....
NandaLin #15
No No No
It's gonna be so fluffy but teary at the same time *^*
And again with Kai being Royalty stuff again ;-;