I need fresh eyes

I have a majority of a chapter done for a story  but I have a question; is it worth posting. It could be so bad that I ruin the entire story. I have sat with it for so long that I don't know if it's bad or not . As I said in the title I really need fresh eyes to see if I should just scrap the chapter and start from scratch. So if you think you could help me out I would be very grateful. Like all my karma grateful. So if you want to help me out then please comment below. However know that I may decide to scrap the chapter you're reading and that it may never see the open web.

I want to add that I usually use a different beta but because I am not sure about the usableness of this chapter and because my regular beta has prior obligations (and I value her friendship & don't wish to waste her time) I am asking you guys 

So please help me out guys.

 

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JFarmer
#1
I will help you out!

I know how it feels to be lost with a story. So I will try to help you get through this.