#inneedofcritics

Hi AFF peeps c:

I'm now MisaselSasliem but I was previously known as DanggeunMarshamllow.

Anyway - I'm here crying for help kkkk'. I have this new short fic (only five chapters long) and let's just say it's not going too well in viewers rating. I'd like to ask if some of you could take a peek and tell me whats missing, please? I think maybe I could do something more about it...?

You don't even have to subscribe - just give me a tip or two about what else can I include or if it's just... plain bad? xD

Thanks for reading this c:

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taelighted
#1
I was confused when I first saw your username in friends' blog posts oops
I could read it?