Important Announcement (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻

Greetings dear readers!

 

Before I go on with my banter, I would like to thank everyone for subscribing to my story, PLAY IN THE CIRCLE!! I truly appreciate the interests, considering that I am still quite new in writing. Your supports truly lift me up to high heaven.ヽ(^Д^)ノ

 

Well, enough of that. I have something important to share.

 

I’ve been rereading Play in the Circle over and over since few days ago and to be honest, as a reader, I am not liking where it heads. This is hard for me because I had some editing done a while ago on the story. It wasn’t anything major, just a bit of tweaking on the details. It took me some times to realize that it wasn’t enough. And I am sincerely not impressed by the mistake on my part.

 

(Note: For new readers, you may miss some old details, because I scrapped them off a month or two ago.)

 

I am widely known in real life to dillydally. And I still do that in writing. Heck, I don’t like it at all.

 

So why do I write this blog post?

 

Well, it’s just to alert you all of the coming changes on the story. I’ve decided to make some alterations on few characters, especially Kirin. She was too tish for what I have in mind. I may need to tone down the , cram in new scenes and dialogues to breathe life into her. Setsu was off tangent, just minutely. James was okay. I’ll keep him the way he is. Kai needs more details to make him likeable and believable. I’m still rethinking and doing a bit of research. Luhan was still imaginary instead of being the true embodiment of Kirin’s true feelings that I actually want.

 

And yeah, the game. The roleplay is the real challenge. That’s when hell breaks and devils roam free. And I have a LOT of thinking needs to be done. The tease, the , what kinda roles do I wanna assign to both Kirin and Kai. Ideas are mostly welcomed so drop them at the comment section down below. Thank you very much!

 

I am sorry that it has come down to this. To me, this editing is important. I want to make Kirin and the rest real to you readers. Still trying to figure my way around writing, but I’ll work hard to make it happen.

 

   

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babynuko
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If it means a better story I dont mind :D
Good luck authornim ~~~~