username & nickname ;; here & here
link to character ;; (blogposts only)
proofread / writing tips ;; y / n
possible paths ;; y/ n (allowing the reviewer to give some feedback on how they could see the character developing further)
100% honesty ;; (do you want your review sugarcoated or unfiltered?)
character related
character name ;; here
status / purpose ;; (if applyfic character, put whether it is accepted, reviewed, or chosen. if otherwise, state purpose)
main focus ;; (what would you like to be the focus of your review?)
username & nickname ;; elegantly & rin
link to character ;; http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1067156
proofread / writing tips ;; y
possible paths ;; y
100% honesty ;; y
character name ;; yeom sena
status / purpose ;; accepted
main focus ;; character development
comments ;; thanks in advance! honestly, i'd like for you to review her personality only since i think it's the most important and to save u some time
username/nickname : kanqwu/tofu
linkeu : http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1119894
proofread/writing tips : sure
possible paths : yes pls
100% honesty : sure
character name : go hyeonmin
status: accepted (?)
** there are no statuses for this fic so i'm not 100% certain he's accepted, though he did go on the candidates page
main focus : ways to give him layers as right now i feel he's a stock joke of a character, but at the same time keep to his core quirks
comments : um yes, hi. uhh it was hard choosing a character for this because all of mine as of late :)) but i'm hoping to be able to fiddle with hyeonmin a bit. while i love him dearly and he's one of my new favorites, i just feel he's lacking something i can't put my finger on. to get an outside perspective would help immensely.
(also i filled out everything but i'm not sure if i was supposed to ;;)
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