Story Review: The Stars, They Shine for You Tonight by serendipity--
Here I go with the review of my second fic I read today (during my class as well :p)!
"The Stars, They Shine for You Tonight" by serendipity--
RATE ON A SCALE OF 1-10:
1. Viewing comfort: 9
2. Title: 10
3. Plot (originality): 9
4. Plot Development: 10
5. Characterizations: 10
6. Ending: 10
Okay, you may say that I'm being hyperbolic for the rate on scale, but I'm not. Really, this fic is literally the best two shots angst fic I ever read so far. It has the uncommon conflict, unreadable plot, and very strong characterization.
It is really angsty, which means, whoever read it will definitely be flown by the emotions of that fic. I shed tears when Luhan was exploded due to the major frustration cause I somehow could feel what Minseok feel at the moment. My heart beat so fast when Luhan was looking for Minseok cause I could feel his anxiety. And I grinned when Luhan woke up in Minseok arms cause I just simply understand how much they love each other.
This. Is. So. Great.
What must I say then?
Firstly, I thought it would be better if the author make the ending last longer. I mean, by mentioning their love, how they'll survive in the future together, or another cheesy stuff to make this angsty fic be sweeter in the end. But then, the ending was just perfect like that. I doubt it will be better if author change it even a little bit, because the ending show us how simple their pure loves are.
I don't think I could write any weakness from this fic cause I didn't get any. This fic is simple, adorable, and lovable. I love astronomy, I love complicated thought, and I love this fic so so much.
Maybe I should personally thank the author for writing such a wonderful story? Thank you so much Kim Heidi, I really appreciate you ;)))
Oh, and this my (silly) tumblr edit for this fic!
www.myueworld.tumblr.com/post/130614957624/and-so-luhan-continues-to-let-minseok-drift
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