This for those who are not in my facebook group. I asked this question to them so I am just posting it here (Copy and Paste) so I can get some more answers. I will be starting on Nerds Revenge Soon.....

Whenever I do my next update, I might ask the readers (you) questions regarding my stories. (Late time instead of constructive criticism I was just overly criticized, so I am really skeptical about asking on the AFF, so I am posting here first.)

I know Dangerous Love really didn't have much meaning, so I may not ask about that at all. I am going to ask the question here as well. If you are only reading Of Both Worlds then just answer about this current story that's fine. It is very important to me that I am learning how to tell a story and tell it in a way that people are interested in what I have to write and they are understanding that its not simple fanfiction because as you know I can't just do simple. 

In Saving You From the Fast Life, Beautiful Homeless Boys, and Of Both Worlds, can you understand or see the underlying meanings in those stories? 
Do you understand the moral of the story and the moral of each couple and their different situations? 
Am I an author that gets that across well to you?
Can you see in my stories, the character introduced to you in chapter one is never the same person in the last chapter, because whether people want to admit it or not as time goes on people change as they go through things?  Or maybe am I not getting it across to you that they've changed?

Do you any of you have any questions for me? Or advice? 

I know the grammar isn't perfect, once I move and have more time on my hands I will get some books to practice better.