Revising the Masked Perfection

To my dearest subscribers and readers of Masked perfection,

 If your pondering on why I posted this blog or on what purpose did I let my readers or subscribers have to read this blog.  So lets begin your curious mind on what would happen or whats the sole reason why I posted this.

First of all I just want to clear some issue if ever It may have or may have not, Firstly I am not going to abandon this story or leave this wonderful site of writing and reading fanfics. 

As the title says it all "Revising the whole story". And Why is that? Well I there this unfortunate incident that had happen and that one of my closest friends accidentaly read the whole story I've prepare for you, wandering on why The story had already been done? Its all because I've plan it for a whole damn semeser in my first few months in college. 

So here it goes,  I actually didn't plan or at least tell my friends that I have an account in aff nor I had decided on writing a story well its all because im not an open type person. It all actually started when I let my one of my  friends touch my valuable phone. Lets just say Im being a lazy which I wont deny. So you can say she actually saw it easily and read upon it while I'm gone doing some freaking research for one of my subjects. So she reads and analize if quite very well added to the point that she read it even without my permission which totally annoyed the the hell out of me but then decides to not be frustrated at all which I really dont want them to see. 

Back to the incident after several hours of doing some reaearch I finally reach her out and to tell you its quite hard since our courses are very much different to each other making it  so hard to make an appointment with her. And as we met up she then  hurriedly walks towards me grinning like an idiot which takes no fool not to know that she knew something taboo. Just then I knew she actually reads the story since it was all it contain other than the pdfs about subjects and picture of lesson I took whenever I got class. Guess what since im lazy person I tend no I always took picture in the board whenever the professor writes and even records it so I could get a clear evidence and it wont took me forever asking about my friends about the lesson since im not that kind of a person.

Whatever lets get straight to the point she reads in it and told me alot of advices or to be more accurate she pointed out facts that are true and which I wont deny. She even asked me If I was the one who wrote it and I subconconciously said yes and with that I got a hit from her. She told me how different I am as a writer as she knew me every well that I more likely do stuffs *ps Im actually not a writer in school to be more factual I do the stuffs one of my friends do since she is a member of the new article and that she just sends me her topic and title and viola I just did and of course nothings free in this world we made a deal and that she would treat me food of foods.* that are much precisely stated out and expressed by more evidently. She kwos every well how accurate I was in writing which makes her wonder what the hell had gone into my mind that I used the kind of form of writing. She told me it wasnt my cup of tea to write the story in that kind of form; the 3rd person.

And as a writer I told her that I did that on purpose but then she know more than I myself. She told me it was confusing as hell and I wont deny it as I actually did it on purpose but then she said its too dull or boring although the usage of words are good. She told me to stick in on the form I usually do. And guess I actually did some reviews on my own and I myself did find it confusing and dull so I decided to revise it into the a better one , the better one that I am used to and confident too.

And by the way she told me to change the name since it didnt catch the whole phrse the plot Im using its just that the title itself merely nvovle its one person which by then I finally understood it that actually didnt catch the plot itself *sigh* I didnt know she could catch the whole me iin particular with my writing skills. And I actually agtee with her that the pov I used and the title are all different from what she usually expects from me.* im not a better writer though i admit its just that im practicing my skills in writing to go deeper in it and enhance isnt it what usually the author thinks that she/he should improve her skills so that people could like and continue reading it.*

Oh before I forgot the important part of the blog I created I wont actually hide it the chapters or draft the story im just going to repost it once again maybe starting this day or starting the following day and in anyways I'll just inform you if I chang its pov but then It wont change any plots or scenery more likely just be more defined and precise in the setting I ploted in every chapters  So thats it thank you for sparing a small amout of time readibg this blog and I do hope your consideration upon the stories revising. Have a Good day and may God bless you and your family.

Sincerely yours,

author!!!

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