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_haneulee
#1
Chapter 14: Chapter 13: This has officially been added to my favorite KaiOC fics! I'm giggling like an idiot while reading. I love the way you write, the details of it and the plot... maybe because it kinda hits home? :) I have people around me with anger management issues and I can definitely relate to the character in this story, you just needed to be the bigger person with them because no matter how "big" they impose they are, they're actually insecure and a pool of goo inside. I also definitely loved the character development (and their relationship), it's realistic that a person doesn't necessarily change overnight but CAN if he WILLS it. Am I blabbing a lot? lol sorry. But thank you for sharing this and I really hope to read more KaiOC fics from you in the future! ╰(*´︶`*)╯♡ Hwaitinggggg~
realamal97
#2
Chapter 12: Awwww this is so cuteee <3 I wish this story was a bit longer T.T I really loved the characters and how their relationship developed. The OC is such an angel I loved her, and Kai having anger issues is new but I liked it :D thank you for writing this lovely fanfic, it was beautifully written <3
RinaBelle #3
Chapter 14: This story is so sweet, caring, and it’s very beautiful to patiently see how things grow. It’ll be my Top10 most favorite Kai’s fics, I swear.
You are so good at fluff.
Keep up the good work!
mistymountains 193 streak #4
Nice story!
deadlysins #5
Chapter 14: this is so cute it had me squealing so hard ;;
i love this story so much thank you for writing it! ?
LittleBabyBreath
#6
Chapter 1: i was hesitating on whether to read this or not bc kai is not really my bias n theres more than 5 chapt but bro this is good yooooo
tonnettie
#7
Chapter 14: This is so suttle :) very light you won't even know that you're already giddy, hahaha!
ByunDal #8
Chapter 14: Gosh I feel so giddy
BtsBtsBap
#9
This is interesting
xXx-JIKOokiee
37 streak #10
Love This ^-^
HyorimJung #11
Chapter 14: I've lost track on how many times did i read this and i still have butterflies in my stomach
xomrskimkai
#12
Rereading this again, And wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it again this time around. The character development is so freaken beautiful and it's at a perfect pace. Like everything about it is so freaken beautiful. You're an amazing writer, especially juggling this with uni, and overseas too. :O

You spoil us so much , and like our couple, I hope you're taking it easy, putting yourself first if you get stressed or finding something to confide in like Jongin did.

You painted them so beautifully, I can't get over it. Hahahha.

Thank you for sharing. :)
takingchences
#13
I think I’m rereading this for like the twentieth time lol
Thesydney
#14
I just finished this story and I absolutely love it. I'm not one to usually comment or give a lot of appreciation for stories, but I feel like I have to say something about this one. I typically read your Baek stories so I went on a whirl to read this one. Most authors on this site don't write with the intent to say something about life, or really anything in general. So, thank you - for crafting something in a way that makes people stop and think that the words they use always has an affect on the people around them. Keep making stories as great as this one xoxoxo
-natsukim #15
Chapter 14: 13 chapters aren’t enough for this kind of Jongin. I wish to read about this Jongin more.

Love this piece XD
Kittens-puppies
#16
Chapter 14: This is so sweet and fluffy and beautiful and I love it!!!
KimHyeJoo #17
Chapter 14: I like your fanfic and always read yours.
Then when i scroll up some featured, i see yours thinking i had read it. But then when i click, i see im not subscribe it and that show i’m not reading it yet.
How im not reading it yet? I thinking to myself that. Ahahaha. Sorry for babbling something not important.
BUT I LOVE YOUR FANFIC! ITS NOT DISSAPOINTED ME. AT ALL.
Fabulous job authornim☺️☺️☺️