Chapter 21: This would've been funnier if one of the Red Velvet girls were on Miran's lil team instead of Soojung because oh my god you preempted their song Rookie hahahahah
Chapter 6: I'm suuuppeerrr late to this story (or at least the start of it) but you can only ever see one bullet in the chamber of a gun, or none at all :) I guess it's similar to how you can only have one piece of lead sticking out of a mechanical pencil and the rest are hidden inside. I know it'll be a pain to go back and correct stuff but if I see anything weird about guns, I'll just point it out after checking with my dad who's a competitive shooter. I know you like being realistic in your writing so hopefully my comments will be a bit useful for future reference :)
Chapter 32: I reckon Xiumin is definitely suspicious due to the multiple occasions in which he seems to know too much and due ti him having the black and red card. I also suspect Soojyng due to her bring a lot less forthcoming in the investigation than Chanyeol and Miran. Also I suspect yugeom because a cast could easily cover the would. And also Jongin seems too suspicious to just be appearing constantly for no apparent reason
Chapter 24: omg Korey I don't even know where to start lol. I'm usually a silent reader tbh but I stumbled onto BBC and Blood Sister after Blood Bound and I finished them in two days :D like you've mentioned, there aren't much Xiumin centered fic out there and my bias is Jongin then Chanyeol and Baekhyun but I gave BBC a try and I couldn't stop reading it. now I'm reading Rogue but it's giving me a headache I do not want to be in Miran's shoes at all lol.
Rogue: My first time reading a spy/action story, I really like the set up, your writing flow (same for your other stories), crushing!Miran and how you manage to put that many idols into one story and give the key players enough shining time. Also brownie points for greasy!JunMyeon and the personal fangirl moment in the last part of chapter 17, B.A.P’s song’s theme fits perfect for making Yong Guk the resistance leader. >_<
Chapter 28: Kim Jongin's new girlfriend is Soojung, "Her hair was unkempted and her lips plump and rosy" that probably was because she was making out with him rather than because of the cold weather. Anyway Jongin either is or is in league with the rougue is since there is a three man conversation of the bad guys in chapter 16, the second voice saying "she might have found out I have a new girlfriend" which probably translates to "Hyeri might have found out Jongin is with Soojung", assuming my previous accusation to be correct.
Speaking of the dodgy three men conversation, they have their hands on Miran's personal files, which should be highly classified. When Minseok confessed hitting Miran's head he commented that she lived in an apartment not a house, and Kyungsoo said he shouldn't have been able to get that information. Plus I remember a scene where Miran caught Minseok in the COO's office with the red&black card, so he could have been snooping for her files. So could Minseok be the third voice?
To be honest Korey I just found this story and read all 28 chapters overnight, so I might be just confunded with the lack of sleep haha. Anyway really brilliant story unfolding, the amount of planning for a story like that must be tremendous, thank you :)
Chapter 32: From what I can recall, the one to have supposedly given the memory stick to Yixing was Jongdae who had it brought in for forensic investigation but then Jongin comes in and says that he found it by the bin and accidentally opened with the initial thought that it was empty so that he could use it but then noticed it had stuff in it and decided to return it to where he first found it I presume?? (i should really go back to that part). Now I really find Yugyeom to be suspicious cuz the cast could have easily covered the bullet wound and so I would like to know now how Miran had actually confirmed it as true, add in the fact that Yugs(that's what I'm calling Yugyeom form now on) refused to diaclose why he was out after curfew but then wasn't he quite tall as well? Tho i'm not sure anout the acrual height. Another question is who handed it to Jongdae? Possible people would be Yugyeom, COO Shin tho less likely to be him or maybe someone else who had gotten hold of it. I was initially thinking it was to frame Miran for being the one to put in the virus but then now I'm confused idk anymore
Chapter 32: From what I can make out so far, there are at least 3 rouge agents that have a pretty strong web of connections. And I'm seriously starting to doubt that Yerim was actually rouge. Seeing the weird circumstances in which she was killed, it wouldn't surprise me if she was another Minji (or whatever the name of the agent that tried to commit suicide is). Then that leaves the other two girls in her cell and I have a feeling both are involved but we haven't been given any clues in regards to Yeri at least. And as for the plot to overthrow the COO, I have reasons to believe the "big" rouge isn't involved, but does take advantage of the situation and has someone on the inside to pass information and maybe to make suggestions so that things would end in his favor. Someone in Junmyeon's cell is def a minor rouge and I'm guessing we haven't actually seen the rouge that much orr the other extreme is someone that appears in every chapter. So it's either someone who appeared maybe once or twice and that's why there is nothing pointing towards him/she or they are damn good and they are actually really close to Miran. It did cross my mind that Kyungsoo might actually be the rouge but that would be too much of a plot twist for me to handle.
And with this I have officially read all your stories and now i'm left to dry because I don't know what to do with my life now that they are over. So I hope an update will come soon, but that's up to you! Great talent you have there! I don't think I enjoyed another story on Aff as much as I enjoyed all of yours and I'm a really picky reader.
Chapter 32: i feel like my head's going to burst thinking who the rouge(s) might be. But please don't let Chanyeol be working intentionally or unintentionally for the other side : (
Chapter 32: 2nd read through and still don't know who to suspect UGH.
Though I guess Kim Jongin is top on my list now, Baekhyun is not an agent but he's 99.99% on the other side. Junmyeon's too obvious so he might be not, or just in the wrong place at the wrong time. Woohyun is 50-50 for me despite the popularity. Yugyeom is not out of the zone yet as he hasn't been checked for bullet holes (but seriously would you be caught like that) & I'm also really hoping Jongdae and Kyungsoo are clean. And seriously Chanyeol please do not betray her.
Chapter 27: That was a sort of a bittersweet ending but I like how she's getting along with chanyeol
God forbid if he betrays her in the end.. I don't know what I'd do
Chapter 24: I'm loving the way Jongin and Minseok show up with handcuffs on Junmyeon's initial suggestion *cough* *walks away* and how they're so brazen about everything
Chapter 22: Okay, I'm going to out a little faith in Miran and say that she's smart enough to not just be spouting information to someone she hasn't even met (yet) and she's trying to.. gauge his reaction? *Sigh*
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