Chapter 1: This...was beautiful writing. Even though I have not gone through what Nameless has gone through but I felt the pain as if it were my own. I did not expect a happy ending as life does not give happy endings sometimes but it fit the story well. I don't have enough words to describe it but great job :)
Chapter 2: Hi author, your story has a great impact to me. I once tried to suicide and i may do it again because apparently life is (as described in your story) although mine is not what nameless went through, but it's also what sehun went through, abandonment. It hurts alot and you know it's just painful. Nice story tho
This story was beautifully written. Yes, a happy ending might have been nice but your ending was perfect. It was open for the reader's own interpretation and I loved that. Funnily enough, I completely disagree with the idea of Nameless being melodramatic about her brother because who are we to judge how someone would feel about the attempted suicide of her brother? She didn't know the truth and that's how she felt about the incident, I don't blame her at all, actually I think I would have found myself feeling the same way about it. I do feel upset on Sehun's behalf because another person he cared about left him in the end but I do wish he could have told her about him being a Royal from the start and perhaps then she would have perhaps listened and tried to understand where he was coming from especially when they were two people who just connected and understood each other when no one else did. Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful story because it's opened my eyes to more darker themes of suicide and depression and I'm so glad I came across this.
Chapter 2: This..this just sums up..i always love reading people's view of mental illness..it could be bad, it could be good, it could be unique..but none of the least everyone's view for it, its different and i have to say i never come across this kind of view and it's surprisingly unique and different..i love it <3
Chapter 1: Wow, I don't read a lot of EXO fiction, but you know what? This story almost reminds me of lament poem I read in my college courses I took a long time ago. Back on topic here first off, this story was so heartrending. I could feel every single emotion throuhgout every line too. Yeah, this story almost made me cry. Thank you for writing this wonderfull well written story, also I love your username it's nice to see a fellow Supernatural fan!
Chapter 2: Oh my God! Mind blowing far away! I can't even express my feels, it was amazing! Thank you so much because willing to sharing your masterpiece with us. Fighting and never ever stop writing, you're truly talented ! ^^
First of all thank you author-nim for giving this story your time and for sharing it with us. You’re truly talented. ^^
The story is well-written. You expressed their thoughts and emotions in kinda a detailed way and I loved it.. :) I thank you for the idea of not giving the OC a name. I can relate to her of why I wouldn't tell Sehun my name. It's a brilliant idea :D.
Nameless‘s character is -too much drama for me that I can't handle it.. I mean her brother is not dead. I first thought he died and I sympathized with her, but then getting to know he's alive I think she should've tried to know why he tried to commit suicide (before knowing the truth from Sehun). I still pitied her though, because she was basically Ruining Her Life. On the other hand, I liked her selfishness because people have been always concentrating on those who go and cry with their mothers when she tells them I give up on you, and forget the other girls who are selfish (They deserve a character too). And honestly I'm kinda selfish when I love someone, so I can relate to this xD. Overall Nameless is an interesting character and I don't think I can forget her. I extremely adore it when the character annoys me (when she was dramatic I was annoyed), because at that time I feel this character is real.
The story’s ending is memorable (my favorite part although I usually don’t like goodbyes). Sehun was afraid of being abandoned but in the end she did abandon him in spite of the fact she knows it’s his darkest nightmare. But she also gave him the key –how to feel alive- when she pulled him under water.
The thing with drowning is that it doesn’t always mean death. Sometimes it’s a new beginning.
Hats off to you for spending your time writing “Pull Me Under”..
Stay healthy and safe ^^
Chapter 2: you have such a flair for writing and it's just so beautifully written out ;-;
the sort of 'open' ending makes it even better odg i can't say how amazing this is and i'm legit sobbing
Chapter 1: Ahhhh I'm glad that I finally read this story and finish it in one shot....this is not my favourite but it really makes me speechless.....your writing is so amazing...it makes me drown into their stories and sometimes I feel that I'm Nameless....I hope Nameless and Sehun will have their happy ending on their own...thanks for the amazing story...
I'm like leaving tons of comments on your stories today, this being an actual story :) But like I was flipping through some videos on youtube, and I got to Kris' MV 'There Is a Place' and the first fifteen seconds totally reminded me of this story I read like one year ago! Like seriously^^
Chapter 1: I-i dont know where to start. I expect a happy ending actually akh why did u do this to me authornim? I love angst stories and urs is my favourite
second time reading it and still as glorious as ever. Nameless is a character that is in everyone of us. The hatred towards her parents and the cruel world that we live in is not an unfamiliar feeling.
However, my goal is to put aside those feelings and look at a world in a more positive perspective. After all, all the negative experiences we have contribute to how we grow as a person and how we use those experiences to better see the world around us. I wish there was a continuation of Nameless' story. Actually no scratch that I already wrote in my head haha.
I also dislike it when adults laugh at our troubles and disregard them as childish problems. They're going through a rough time too, but that does not mean our worries and feelings are any less then their's.
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