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Teneky
698 streak #1
Chapter 2: Sadly, bullying has become more and more common. Bullies bully the weaker ones, and not the ones that stand up for themselves. I had an encounter with a bully myself, it got to the point where it turned into a physical fight (she got worse bruises than me), so in the end, she never touched me again.

I know it's not easy to stand up, but it's either that, or you let them do what they want. :(

What school?
What system?
What teachers?
Or parents?

They all say the same thing: 'It's a kid's thing. It will pass.'

Sadly, it doesn't pass. It gets worse and some kids decided they don't want to live anymore. :(
Teneky
698 streak #2
Chapter 1: 💗🌹💗🌹💗

Characters: Great!

Topic: Great!

Writing style: Amazing!

This story was so moving and touching that I can't even find the right words how to describe it! It shows the reality of what people with depression go through and I really like how to represent it in this story! Emotions were there and it was truly amazing!

Thank you for this one! ^^

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WholesomeRain
#3
Chapter 2: Okay so its hard to put into words, but your writing has that effect where it feels like words are stuck on my tongue. Like reading it, it feels like if I could just find the words I’d be able to like write the best book ever. Tdoj also has that effect, and has been one of my favorite things for years (i have another account that I started reading it on so all my comments are under got7andme lol) but anyway- I love your writing so much, and this oneshot was so interesting to read. I of course want to head canon that Nameless and Sehun reconnected, but it almost seems wrong to do that. I feel like the possibility is enough. The topic of this is obviously so serious, and I hope it has and continues to Impact people in a positive way. I really enjoyed reading this:)
Teneky
698 streak #4
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This one sounds interesting!
Can't wait! 😁

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katmod16 #5
Chapter 2: This is indeed a bittersweet story. It makes me think of the important people around me. Thank you for this nice story Ms. Author.
tardis356 #6
Felt crying
tardis356 #7
Chapter 1: So nice story
bumpkin #8
This was so good. It was emotional and realistic. Will definitely be on my reread list
yeolliepopyeol
#9
Will read it again and again.
denisskye
#10
Chapter 1: Deep, heart-clenching reality. The best thing, aside from the technical proficiency of this story, is how real it is. It takes on bullying in lieu of both first-hand experience and a removed character's experience. It depicts depression with such raw emotions that I can't help but empathize with both characters without necessarily relating to their experience. Really beautiful, well-written and emotional! I'm a late reader, but thank you for this wonderful piece!
minion27
212 streak #11
Chapter 2: This is such a great story that related with life
beautifyme
#12
Chapter 2: i enjoyed reading this. thank you!!
EuJin_13J
#13
Chapter 1: This is soo ing real... I can feel every part of it.. Very good job authornim
emcyi2
#14
Chapter 1: Wow this story got me into my feels!!!!! It was bitter sweet story (more bitter actually) but I really love it!! It hurts that Sehun compares Nameless to his dad.... I'm just left wondering if Namless will seek out Sehun, cuz she has his jacket and the fact her brother is awake...? Idk but I'm just secretly hoping they meet again.
It's interesting to see from Sehun's pov during Royally Screwed time-even though this had some spoilers-but anyway it gave some more insight of his internal struggle and show much development in his character.
Thank you soooooo much for writing this amazing story!!!
lilsquishy #15
i love this story!
SAAxARMY #16
Chapter 2: i enjoyed this story alot
serenidad
#17
good job!!
1crystalthao #18
Chapter 2: A lot of feels for this!