Chapter 34: Awww Finally. Jiyong be a man and told YG and all the rest members about his rls with CL! I was waiting so long for this moment to come. And the Ending is just so GOOD! seungri always be seungri. funny and so cuteee. haha. Thanks for this awesome story.
Chapter 34: Hahahah. This is so cute, finally everyone got to be together :'D and Seungri, I AM YOUR FUTURE WIFEEEEEEEE! /runs like a buffalo towards a terrified seungri/ and everyone's having it going on..... except for the innocent minji and a waiting daesung. Hahahah. The only pet peeve I have here is the usage of oppa, unnie, noona and hyung. For example, you still make bom call seunghyun oppa even when he's obviously calling bom noona. And when BB called 2NE1 unnie...... it's just....... I cant.......
But aside from that and some grammatical errors, the rest is fine :D
Cutr story. Loved the ending for skydragon especially and seungri's randomness. I also gotta givr some lovr to Daemin. I approve! <3 so many moments unlike most fanfics. What i didnt approvr of was the use of "unnies, noonas and oppas".... Like when you made big bang call 2ne1 "unnies" and other examples. Besides that, i enjoyed reading this story. :)
love this story! i love how you equally shared the spotlight with all the couples in here! in other stories DaraYang and DaeMin aren't given enough attention but in here you did, and thank you for that! haha. I'm a skydragon shipper and I love springtempo too, but in reading through fics I get so deprived of DaraYang and DaeMin moments.. hahaha..
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