Chapter 3: I actually expected this story to be average - like just describing an average day between two average friends in an average life. Boy was I wrong, at the end! This was a not so average story, after all.
Chapter 3: Wow... just... wow... I think this is so far the best one I've read... The way you portray everything made me think I was watching them both from afar. The feeling you put on this made my heart smile. It was so touching, so nice to read and so... happy! I could feel happiness in my heart while reading it... Made me think of so many things, how much people want in their life without even knowing they have everything they need in their hands. I'm touched, really... :D
Chapter 2: Good one author-nim, i liked that you kind of portrayed them like average persons,living an average life like we do. I'm not a huge fan of TaeKai but after reading this, i'm reconsidering. :)
Chapter 1: This had a very interesting opening, with the comparison to anime. I liked the picture you painted with the Cicadas too. Heh. It's interesting reading Taemin's thoughts and feelings like that. Kai was so cute, smiling and waving~ I'd like to see where you go with this. ^^
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