hi, I just like to say that, great job on the story! I'ts really interesting and, albeit rather predictable, very cute. I'd just like to say that: please, take it easy on the caps! I get kinda confused on a certain sentence as to if their really angry or shouting when you use those caps. so please, take it easy.. other than that and your grammar (which I hope will improve. peace!). It's a wonderful story! keep it up! oh, and please, update soon! thanks! :)
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