Chapter 42: FCAGSDVHBFGJ IDK HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS CHAPTER IHDGFHHHHHHGF I'm. looking respectfully.... i'm so stressed all i can think about is chanyeol i'm sad
Chapter 34: “leaning uselessly upon the pillar of unfailing support that had found him so unexpectedly, like driftwood come by a shipwrecked sailor on his last breath” holy hell this line is so beautiful x_x it really encompasses their relationship too T_T gahh i love your writing
Chapter 25: “chanyeol now tasted the guilt in the tears baekhyun had shed that night” THIS LINE…. :( chanyeol is too good but also exactly what baekhyun needs
Chapter 13: baekhyun :((( im remembering bits and pieces about this now, and i think one small reason i’m in love with this (the biggest reason is the way you write) is that i can relate a little to the expectations that await baekhyun; idk i really feel for him even though i realize he’s done something wrong like ik what that pressure is like so i really understand what he’s going through - or maybe you’ve just done such an incredible job with this T_T i’m not ready for the heartbreak though.... because i feel for chanyeol too. p.s. i mightve teared up during this chapter
Chapter 12: ahh u wrote this chapter so well >< again i’m shy djfjsj this was nice lol. also i noticed that my comments are posting twice? i’m not sure why so i’ve tried deleting the duplicates T_T
Chapter 10: OH MY GOD HE WENT HHHHH I COMPLWTELY FORGOT HE ACTUALLY SHOWED UP ALSO omg a thought crossed my mind while phoenix rising performed - i just feel like. i can see phoenix performing nothin’..... i havent finished the chapter yet i just had to write down this thought
Chapter 8: this line is so pretty “His lips curved around the name like a secret, like an incantation, like a lifeline to sanity.” BUT I COULDNT EVEN PROCESS IT THEY KISSED - eye
Chapter 4: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/362785/4'>04. Hot Box</a></span>
“he was distinctly leggy” that’s our guy >_< hhhhh i’m blushing after that stare moment
Chapter 65: So I'm finally done re reading this entire story for the third time :D that was 150k words already? I didn't even realize!
My previous comment on this chapter shows "chapter 65" haha i got so confused when i saw that. I'm guessing that was part of the formatting problem you mentioned in your blog, and it's all fixed now <3
Hope you're doing well ❤️
Can't wait to read the next update ❤️❤️
I wonder if Kai knows that they know about what he did? That despite everything they're trying to protect him? I wonder if he'll ever apologize for the mess he has caused.
"may the bridges i burn light my way" that's right baek, don't give up. Rise from the ashes :')
"I always want you" the way i knew chanyeol would say "insatiable" in reply haha
"There is only one way to atone for his sins. He will let the hero win." the way he keeps painting himself as the villain :'(
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