Chapter 30: As a Chinese, I find it odd you would call a kid 黄金龙.
Firstly, *whispers* no one really calls their kid gold dragon. Do you see anyone walking around with the name Gold Dragon. I don't either.
And secondly, because a child is usually given just one character for a name( more common in Olden China), or two characters for a name. I personally have never seen anyone give their child three characters for a name, ever, not including their surname.
吴黄金龙? A bit weird if you asked me. But whatever, just wanted to point that out.
Cute story and I hope your future projects continue to be successful!
P.S. you might want to proofread your story or get someone to beta for you. Just a suggestion.
Chapter 30: I started to read this, when this was already completed. I don't really know how to start. This story is just so fantastic! I mean, just so good, funny, sweet and etc... Amazing! :D You're a very good writer! This definitely one of the best stories that I've ever read! And a lovely and happy ending ^^ I love this! Thank you! :)^^
Chapter 15: Huaaaaaa....so sad for this chap, i was worred about Tao’s said ”i’m not going back....
So sad in part Yitao missing his ’Mommy’. Its make me crying alot.
But overal this ff is so nice story....i like
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