Chapter 18: awesome way to go with the story! Keep up the good work.

Chapter 17: Still liking the story line. Keep up the good work.

Chapter 16: I really hope all my readers are enjoying the story so far. Please don't be shy comment if you like it and if you would like Rose to work with any specific group. I am open for ideas

Chapter 12: To all my readers sorry for the delay of posting I just got a new job at a brand new store that had its grand opening last Sunday and my computer was having some major issues the next post will be up soon. Thank you all for your support

Chapter 11: Key is really fuming!!

Chapter 9: Liking the story line.

Chapter 9: Oh ok... Thanks!!

Chapter 7: I understand what you mean but I did it this time that way due to I wanted different thoughts going on through that. It will make sense later.

Ok so now I don't even know for sure who I want with Rose.... But.... You keep repeating the same sene like 4 or 5 times.... It makes the story much less interesting... Sorry but I thought u should know my opinions.. Sorry for the long comment....

You'll have to find out. I have a plan worse comes to worse I can always create a spin off keeping the beginning and making from here on different.

I don't know.... I like the idea of key and rose.... Keys look pretty with Roses... U know?

Yea I figure make it be that way. He deserved it I think

Hahaha Jjong punched Key.... Hahaha keep writing!!!

its very interesting, update soon ^^

Thanks for commenting. I got lucky with my writing it comes to me in waves and be able to get all this out hopefully more will come in the next day or two

this story is starting great!!! good job!!! and im glad to be the 1st comment-er!!!