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ephemeral--
#1
I LOVE THIS ૮ ˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶ ა
happybubblelove
#2
During the first half of the story, I wanted to throw something at Kris but then the ending happened and I just want to hug both of them lol.
Aigoo, poor Tao... Can't find his hyungs all the time ><
angelsmiles
#3
Hahaha awwww, Tao! Kris, honey, love you, but seriously, twice in the same trip? SERIOUSLY? I'm glad it's all okay now :3
kpoplovers93
#4
This is my style of writing, I don't feel its wrong. but thank-you for the criticism. and damn spelling issues >,<
Sunnysideofcookies
#5
Lol so um I'm officially in love with this couple....
The only thing that's wrong with this story is that every time someone new is talking, it needs to be a separate paragraph. And you used you instead of you're.
But other than that this is adorable and funny and heartfelt and yeah, awesomeness.
kpoplovers93
#6
I was kind of irrationally angry at Kris
--inspiritic
#7
Awwws but seriously when Tao got left I was like My god kris how can u just walk off like that?! Good thing those fan girls were like screaming for Tao.
Bliss_Destiny #8
Waitinggggggggggggggggggggggg