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Kyu3392 #1
Chapter 19: GAH NO IT'S OVER T_T -has tantrum on couch- THIS WAS SO SICKENINGLY AWESOME! I JUST LOVED EVERY DAMN THING ABOUT IT. -dies momentarily from how much I loved this, but then comes back to life because I must finish this comment and tell you how much I adored this story- Chanyeol's character was so amazingly great in this, just like...can I please have one? -gives you puppy dog eyes- Honestly, he was just too weird and adorable to bear almost XD AND FREAKING BEAKHYUN OMG I wanted to reach through the screen and slap him one so many times, but I also loved him to bits <3 (bi-polar feels were running wild) So I could really identify with Kai lol ALSO YOU MADE ME LAUGH SO ING MUCH LIKE IT'S CRAZY XD The freaking watching scene...and when Baek stepped on the fish...JUST OMG I think I literally died for a second, I was at like that point where you're laughing so hard that no sound is even coming out anymore XDDD Also, little descriptions like the thing about Yeol's face looking like a kid who opened their Christmas present to find socks, or about looking like he found Jesus or something on the potatoe chip...those just KILLED me, they were so perfect. So yeah, don't think you're not funny, bc you author-nim are SERIOUSLY SERIOUSLY HILARIOUS. So yeah, spent the last half of the day that I should have spent updating my own stuff reading this and NO REGRETS MAN NO REGRETS bc I competely and utterly loved this to bits and pieces and now I completely and it utterly love you -attempts to hug you through computer, but fails, obviously- Alrighty then insane gushing over, and now I am off to read everything else you've ever written now! <3
JuliePicaroon #2
Chapter 1: I begin to read your story now and I think I have fallen in love with it ! Although it's the first chapter, I can't tell you enough how interesting the plot is already <333
And Baekyeol is OTP anyways hshshshshs I think I will enjoy reading this <33333333
_Hizumi #3
Chapter 19: With tomorrow I mean today. In four hours.
_Hizumi #4
Chapter 19: It's almost 4 am and I have school tomorrow at 8. It's your fault for writing such a nice fanfic!
Ashleigh #5
I love this fic seriously!!!
Its perfectly writyen grammatical and the writing style is awesome!! And the dialoges are great!!
Auxiliare
#6
Chapter 19: /CRIES SO HARD BECAUSE THIS PIECE WAS SOOO GOOODDD/ TT n TT
AUTHOR-NIMMM!!!! THANKS FOR WRITING THIS, THIS STORY WAS AMAZING AND I STAYED UP TILL 5 30 AM TO FINISH READING THIS /is shot for not reading this earlier/ BUT HOLY CRAPP THIS WAS SOO GOODD AND YOU SHOULD REALLY WRITE A SEQUEL /HINT HINT, WINK WINK, NUDGE NUDGE, GIVES YOU A REALLY WEIRD AWKWARD STARE/
PURRTTYYY PLEASEEEE??? :D?? WITH A CHERRY ON TOP?? PLUS LOTS OF ICECREAM?? I'LL GIVE YOU BAGS OF COOKIES!!!!! TT A TT

/LOVES YOU/
Amicae
#7
Ask me what I did from ten to three in the morning. Spoiler- read this entire. Cried so much. Author-nim you are truly beautiful. Beakkie made me real mad and my heart broke for channie. But I love them both.
NaruBaka
#8
Chapter 19: Akfnfkldnfnslsnfkddnfdldkn I am so sad that I didn't find this earlier. ;-: this story is so cuuuute! And at times.. I just really wanted to slap Baek in the face, 'cause really... How dense can one be? God..

Anyhow. I really like the ending, and the middle.. And the beginning.. And well, everything.

Keep up the good work. ^^ *off to read your other stories*
kadenrika
#9
one of the best fanfics i've ever read!! :D <3
doLphin_pandas
#10
Chapter 16: I almost cried when chanyeol rejected him idk why.. I thought everything was gonna fine now T.T
sekar5483 #11
Chapter 15: And congrats :D
sekar5483 #12
Chapter 15: This is my favourite chapter :D
sekar5483 #13
Chapter 15: This is my favourite chapter :D
flo1996
#14
Chapter 19: OMO MY BAEKYEOL FEELS... I CAN'T ><
byunbebek #15
this is good.....baekhyun so clueless


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glad they made up in the end...
meganemiicchi #16
Chapter 19: OMG FEELS!!!

I really want to punch Baek at the beginning and take away Yeol from him..like really why is he so clueless about his feeling?

But this story is really beautiful..wow.

Thanks for writing this author nim! <3
Village-Idiot #17
Chapter 19: I'm not even a fan of EXO but I feel like a love them now xD
I really really reaaaaally like this story a lot, I want to read more of your stories, you're just that good at writing ñ_ñ
mivelambas #18
Chapter 19: AND DONT GET ME STARTED ON THOSE PARTS THAT LEFT ME IN STITCHES THIS STORY IS A ING MASTERPIECE YOU, AUTHOR-NIM WROTE IT SO WELL I THINK IM GOING TO CRY. THIS IS SO FUNNY AND THE ING SAD ING ANGSTY ING PARTS IS SO HEART BREAKING IM CURSING LIKE A SAILOR HERE PARDON ME BECAUSE FJWLLAMDKQLKSMXPQMXLXMCKKCKEKEKDOEKSLQLLQ THIS STORY I JUST CANT-
mivelambas #19
Chapter 19: I CANT EVEN EXPLAIN WHAT IM FEELING WHEB I READ THIS AGAIN JDOWOWKDBJFIEOWLDLDKNWNDIEICIEIIQPWKCL THIS IS FULLULL OF FLUFFY TY GOODNESS!!! IF YOURE WONDERING IF SOMETHING LIKE THAT EVEN EXISTS WELL THIS STORY IS A GREAT ING EXAMPLE GJOWLSMWKDJIRKWOXNWIKWNSJD I CANT EVEN CONTAIN MY FEELS RIGHT NOW
falafalafel #20
This story makes me so angry???? I feel like punching Baek most of the time. But then i would always crack up at the way the author writes and describes things. Funny and a complete perfection!!! <3<3
FrozenBreeze
#21
Chapter 19: I'm so in love with this story, one day randomly I google "awkward exo asianfanfic" and this came out <3 I wanted to read something based on that "awkward" MTV show but then destiny gave me this and oh my god I really love (and I really love how awkwardly you wrote the most awkward I've ever read and it was A FREAKING MASTERPIECE lol) the only thing I didn't like was that you kept telling in most of the A/Ns that you were a loser and you were not being able to write good stuff and now I'm telling you, I'M FREAKING PICKY!!! and the way you narrate is really good and the plot is so twisted (yeah, I hate the fact that you took at least 5 chapter to get the plot naturally flowing but it was well written anyways lol) and and and I think that was all I have to say (my first language isn't english so sorry for my broken english u_u).
"Once the final bell rings, Baekhyun busts out the door in true High School Musical style." OH MY GOD that was freaking hilarious XDDDD you got me a good amount of time busting my guts out laughing lol, you should write a comedy (if you have please tell me I'd love to read it!)
And... yeah. That's it <3
I don't know why but I love you author-nim <3 I'm subscribing to you right now ^^
guten Nacht <3
Athena1
#22
congrats on being featured
singinmyblues #23
Chapter 19: AMG I FREAKING LOVED THIS STORY AND IT WAS SO CUTE AND FUNNY BUT ALSO SAD AND I FELT SO SORRY FOR CHANYEOL AND OMG THE FEEELSSSS!! Thank you for writing this wonderfully amazing story although I kinda hate you for it as well because I almost fell asleep in school all the time today because I stayed up til way after midnnight last night because I just couldn't stop reading T_T (haha jk jk luv ya sweetheart^^) and omg now I'm gonna have to check out all your other fics as well because AMGILOVEYOUSOMUCH!! <333
Gimmickgame #24
Chapter 6: I started it a few hours ago and I just couldn't help myself but I finished it in one sit. It made me laugh, it made me cry, it gave me so many feelings! Thank you so much for this amazing story :) you're amazing <3
yoonyulk
#25
dear author,
This story was simply amazing.
I loved it, i want to read it again (maybe i will lol)
thanks for an amazing fanfic!! :D
thexiahtic10 #26
Chapter 19: amazing story authornim~
byunbebek #27
Chapter 18: nice story...authornim.....
i read it last month....but cant comment that time.....and i can still feel it....daebak....
Ismera #28
Chapter 19: OMG!! this was all kinds of amazing, this is the first exo fic that I have totally fallen in love with and I have been searching for something like this for ages :) thank you much for writing something so amazing :) I loved loved loved this!!

my fav line: "boyfriends who kiss and stuff" hahahahahaha
iloveyoualways
#29
Chapter 19: Im so happy I came across this story ♥ I was looking for a really good fanfic to read and I ADORE this one. I love LOVE chanyeol's personality! Ahh I'd do anything for a friend like him ♥ good job on the story ♥♥♥♥♥
lixpark
#30
Chapter 19: I loved this story I just read it And I already want to read it again.
origamifoxes #31
Chapter 19: This story was so frustrating and fluffy and WONDERFUL! MY FEELS ARE EXPLODING~
Every single chapter was so captivating and awkward - I loved every single one!
You developed each of the character's personality so well, especially awkward (and of course y~) Chanyeol, making the story perfect and absolutely addicting!
... Wow, I think I'll stop now, I sound kinda creepy >.<
I hope you write a fluffy sequel! :D
CatherineMather
#32
Chapter 19: Can I just spaz over this fic please? I love it so much! Like omfg it was so amazing and realistic and I love Baekyeol fics as it is, but this one was fabulous. It's so hard for me to find a fanfic that I REALLY like and I REALLY liked this one. Like I really wanted there to be a sequel, but it's okay because this fic was so awesome it made up for it. Like ABJDJDBSNAMS thank you for gracing us with such an amazing fic... That sounded kinda weird... Well whatever. I just wanted you to know that it was fabulous. I love how Jonghyun and the rest of SHINee were in this and how much of a diva Key was. Plus I was laughing A LOT at all the awkwardness of Chanyeol and Baekhyun, especially because I do similar things like them. Well, minus the thing... I meant in their personality, like how awkward and dorky Chanyeol is. Lol I loved this so much, good job! ^_^
MinAlly #33
Chapter 19: I really love this story. I felt really engrossed as I read on and I felt like I was in the story. I felt like I was feeling what everything Baekhyun was feeling and it was PAINful to feel the angst. ESPECIALLY for freaking lovely Chanyeol who sacrificed so much. I really felt the feeling of sacrifice with him and what he did for Baekhyun. And Chanyeol matches really well being awkward and y, that's him. Thank you to KAI omg what would this fic be without you. I also really loved the hint of Kaisoo at the end. I feel really grateful for you, author-nim because after my heart was FREAKING CRYING from the angst, you helped heal us by your comedy at the end. I like how Baekhyun and Chanyeol still kept their "best-friend" treatment to each other and loved each other at the same time. AND YES I AGREE with you that the ....really cute and fluffy is better than the actual thing. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AUTHOR-NIM. I LOVE BAEKYEOL SO MUCH. BEAKYEOL FEELS TO THE EXTREME. I will surely read more from you! <3 LOVE YOU.
OhJiYun
#34
Chapter 19: Omg. Haha! Its so awkward. Nice story!
rhian1006
#35
Chapter 19: And can you please.. i need a fluffy sequel.. i want more feels. :) pleeeeeeease.
rhian1006
#36
Chapter 19: Can I say this?

At first I was ing board and i dont know why. But its good that i continue reading it because chanyeol is a god in front baekhyun and i'm fcking dying here.

You're awesome! suuuuper!
Shawols_Unite #37
Chapter 19: I love this fic so much omg I've only just found like a day or two ago and I've finally finished reading it and iT'S ING AMAZING OK.(and oh-so-awkward but the awkwardness just makes the story better :3) I have to say when you wrote that Chanyeol was wearing spongebob boxers, I couldn't stop laughing because in EXO's Showtime, Kris gave Chanyeol spongebob boxers for his birthday XD So there's proof that Kris read your fanfic XDD
Anyway,I love you so much for writing this; it's definitely one of my favourite BaekYeol fanfics <3
sassbaek #38
Chapter 19: LOL this was really awkward haha...but very enjoyable ! Good job :) :)
seoulsilver #39
Chapter 1: First of all, I've read this fic like a hundred times and made an account just to let you know how much I love it. Second of all, I was just watching the latest EXO's Showtime episode where everyone's shopping for gifts for Chanyeol, and KRIS BOUGHT HIM SPONGEBOB BOXERS. I'm dying. I'm actually dying. THIS IS EVIDENCE THAT KRIS HAS READ THIS FIC.
Sleepless #40
Chapter 12: When you start to read chapter 12 please go to yourepeat.com, search for "Nell- Coin seller",and thank me later
Lydabaekkie
#41
Chapter 19: Cute absolutely cute ..:D
happyeollie
#42
Chapter 19: So sweeeeet omfg so greasy and cheesy and mushy and everything ahaha MY FEELSSSS XDD This story really made my mood swing, one time I was squealing and the other time I was sad AND IT WAS SO ING ADORABLE THAT PARK ING CHANYEOL OMF I NEED OXYGEN ahaha XD One of my favourite BaekYeol fics, congrats~ :D
passionburn19
#43
Chapter 19: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Abhieghail
#44
Chapter 19: This is really a cute story.!! <3 love it.
SimpleLuciferSHM #45
Chapter 18: I totally love it when Baek made up the plan to get Yeollie back. And... the weather spoils everything...!!! It's so cute!!! Very good story!!!
Shiny_sushi
#46
Chapter 19: Woauh..seriously I wonder why I didn't comment the first time I read this story! It's a great story! Honestly, it's the story in itself which attracted me and not the pairing since I'm not a Baekyeol shipper! But this story tickled my feelings! I laughed and felt sad and nearly cried (I don't cry I'm tough girl...nah just joking...)! I also never read story or chapters but you managed to make it great, I mean it wasn't like meaningless rough scenes but something...well, sweet?! You're a writing genius if you managed to make me read ! XD
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this fanfic! ^-^ <3
okidohkie
#47
Chapter 19: I just read this in one go and what can I say? Well, it's...awkward haha cwidt? But it's incredibly sweet and cute and perfect. I would have loved a sequel but I know the work it takes to write so I'm not complaining XD I wanted to punch Baek in the face _-_ I mean really Baekhyun!? OTL anyway, great job! :D
Chanyeolsgurl #48
Chapter 19: SO I JUST READ THIS WHOLE THING IN LIEK LESS THAN AN HOUR AND IT WAS SO ING ADORABLE I FORGOT HOW TO PERSON OMFG
margaloopsy #49
Chapter 6: "Because it’s pouring now. And Baekhyun’s caught without his 182 cm. umbrella. "

okay i love that line...woohoo gonna read the rest!
Anon3791
#50
Ugh this was soo good! Chanyeol was so cute and sweet and dorky :3 thank you for writing such a great story!
shun-kun
#51
Chapter 19: owwaaa~~~ this story was soooo perfect! Like, I laughed, I wanted to punch people in the face, I was touched by the characters.. just.. wow :)

And Beak is so stupid <3 And Yeol a genious and Tall Akward Touchy Teddy Bear <3 [Drunk Kai.. LOL]

Yeol's side story was just perfect, I wanted to punch Baek in the face so hard for being blind like this... :o

Anyways

Thank youuu~~~ :D
Pabo-sshi #52
Chapter 19: This story is just so cute and...awkward..XD I love it!!!! It's so perfect! ;_;<3333
i wish to see more awesome works like this, fighting, unnie! ^-^
milkysehunnie93 #53
Chapter 19: i love this fic ! i'm sooo gay after read your fic. thanks author-nim. lol <3
purplebluepink #54
Chapter 9: Write kailu plsssssssss. Something interesting like this story :D
daehae
#55
Chapter 19: the ending was just...............awkward.

LMAO
winterseoul
#56
Chapter 12: You can't see it BUT I AM REAAAAAALLY BLUSHING SO HARD RIGHT NOW AND MY EYES ARE TEARING UP BECAUSE I AM SO EMBARRASSED because just as what the title says: THIS IS SOOOOOO AWKWARDS. *tears tears tears*
Sebaekthigh
#57
Chapter 19: Aw no its over !!!!!! :,( it was so good. Jealous baekhyun is sho cute! And this had me laughing at some parts. I reaaally loved how they made up and started dating I just wish there was more chapters of them dating! Still good story !
heart_entice #58
Chapter 19: I really2 love your story, one of the best fic i've ever read!!!
Hyunika #59
i love your story very much!!!!!
tess0214 #60
Chapter 19: and here I am again !!! waaaa loved it !1
_wonwoah #61
I loved it!!!! Really really really loved it!!!! Author-nim you're a genius. *O* Thank you for sharing this fic. <3 Saranghae TvT
tess0214 #62
Chapter 19: totally loved it !!!!
sdjfkasjdlfaskdjñasldalñsdñlsd LOVED IT !!
ZicoLove3 #63
Chapter 19: I really loved this story gosh kmwtpwjpjatxtqjxb good job
justinyo #64
I don't have an account on AFF but when I read this, i just cant let it pass. I mean, I just cant read another one fic without actually saying how great your story was. It was really good that I cant really think of the best word to describe it. Thank you for thiss!

And in case you're a little confused, yes I'm a guy. Haha! :))) Thank you author-nim. :)
bakayaroKyul
#65
Chapter 19: nice story! liked it a lot ^-^
Mizukiix3
#66
Chapter 19: This is the cutest thing i've ever read omg
estranged_ #67
this is a great story :)
foreverbaby
#68
Chapter 14: I was like omfg r u on crack writing this
cheesecakedae
#69
Chapter 19: This is sooo good! I finished it like in 2 hrs and I must say that it was worth reading it :)
bookishvice
#70
Chapter 19: I finished reading and this happened..
2:43:05 - subscribe to story
2:43:15 - tag it as Favorite
2:43:24 - subscribe to Kaisoo story
2:43:32 - subscribe to author
2:43:40 - add author on tumblr
So yeah idk what happened. This is one of my favorite Baekyeol fics ever and I don't really read that many fics of these two because I prefer other otps. But this story, your writing just me in and I loved every funny, cheesy, and awkward moment of it! I'm not very good at the spazzing thing, but spazzing I am. Herehavesomesparkles (ノ´ヮ´)ノ*:✧
HappinesssDelight #71
Chapter 19: they're soooo sweet! <3 I like how their love story goes...
fallendevil_17
#72
Chapter 19: I found this story of yours from a tumblr acc~ I basically put off my assignment just to finish reading this story but no regrets though~ Really, really worth it~ This story is so awesome~ I love the plot~ Love the characters~ love the lines and the too(?) XDDD Anyway, great one author-nim~ ^^
jodassie
#73
Chapter 19: This story was sooooo good I finished reading it in a day sob :') You had my heart breaking for Chanyeol right to the every end but omg I'm so glad that they ended up happy together hehehe :') Thanks for writing this, I thoroughly enjoyed it (and please write more stories! yayyyyy)
HappinesssDelight #74
Chapter 6: i'm really hurt for chanyeol in this part...
sharmanipol
#75
Chapter 19: finish reading! thanks! i really enjoyed it :))