Chapter 19: You're welcome!! I'm not finished with this story yet but will be continued tomorrow because it's 1 in the morning right now. Love this story and will continue reading your others! Btw, I ship BaekEun so I hope they'll end up together!! ^^
Idk I don't even feel I can have the rights to critic you, since just by a glance you and I can tell I'm the worse author. Oh dear.
I am a fan of some things hanging/untold, though sometimes it can confuse me if misused. But since writing about this topic is as tricky and confusing as heck (I ever tried to write about fantasy and I myself is confused.as.heck. haha) I guess it's ok
But since so far I haven't felt any confusion in SMP, SMP!Extra, and AFAA so far, so I guess you turned out that you fixed this? That's good^^ golly, I feel ashamed right now. Teehee
Anyways, other than this confusion over Mina and several other things I can't seem to remember (I guess I'm a Lay type of person......), I have no other complaint over this story! Grammar and vocabulary are perf, even if there's an error I can't seem to notice, the prime characters on this story developed, plus I love your writing style (and you lurb BaekYeol! Me too! I don't ship them gay though....)!
And I just realized..... I just freaking reviewed your fanfic. Oh dear. Hope you didn't mind this very long comment. Oh! And don't take my rants seriously. After all, you're the author and it's up to you to decide things on your story and my comment is just a... comment (way to go Captain Obvious!).
Please always keep the thought that you and your stories are AWESUMM!!! in mind~^^ I hope that any of my words didn't annoy/offend you in any way, and if you did get annoyed/offended, sorry in advance! I didn't mean that^^ keep the great work on 'wow'-ing me all the time going on!
P.S if you noticed that I didn't comment on SMP (you probably wont xD), I actually read that on my exam period and I don't really have a time to comment. I'll comment when I got the time to re-read!^^
P.P.S gosh this is getting uncontrollable. Good luck on reading all this.....
P.P.P.S I should really get some sleep since it's 5am and I haven't even blinked a sleep....... (if that makes sense for you...)
Anyways, I know it's a bit late that I decided to comment on this, but I really love how Chanyeol is being a very great best friend to Baekhyun. He cares about him, he supports him, and he would've knock some sense to him when needed. A good friend would tell you off, a bestfriend would punch you in the face....
Chanyeol didn't want Baekhyun to do the same mistakes he did and that's really sweet. Plus he's sort of team BaekEun's first member, so..... hahaha. So the saying that best friends got each other's back through thick and thin is true, eh? I've got a lot of friends, but no bestie... sad for me, eh?
Another thing that popped to my mind, how did Naeun get into EXO Planet? Because she and Baekhyun wished for the same thing at the same time? That's always my theory but idk.... probably you just let it be to left your readers hanging XD
Adore the BaekEun sweetness over the chapters but I guess I won't be up for it. I'm not really into sweet things, just like Kai. Speaking of Kai........ now that your braids are gone I VOLUNTEER TO BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND KIM JONGIN /inserts that 'i volunteer' meme/ (Since Chanyeol is with Mina and HunHan might've spend more 'bro time' together... my top 3 is gone boo-hoo) .....oh dear please forget that, I'm shameless lmao
Since I read your 3 newest works, I realize that you made some progress. I don't know where to point my finger to, but I just know that there's progress just by reading it.
I can only compare this with SMP, since both stories are completed. SMP didn't confuse me at all, probably because of a simpler, more relatable plot? Idk, writing about things we aren't can be tricky, let alone writing about deaths, angels and Heaven. And I know writing things that relate to time is really tricky, so I understand that you confuse me with the whole Mina situation. I undertand completely that you want to left things a mystery, but sometimes a bit of more explaining is actually better?
Sometimes, imagining things for me is a lot funner than you setting on everything~ I guess our likings in how to end fics are the same! Teehee
Even so, I'm glad you end things in a hanging way, but still informing the readers that the cast will be living happily.
I'm glad that you decided to reunite Chanyeol and Mina. Before I always imagined that Mina would somehow being included in the ending, but not meeting Chanyeol or the rest of the gang. I always imagined that when the group is busy rejoicing, someplace in a hospital Mina would slowly open her eyes, calling out Chanyeol. But since everyone's imaginations are different... besides I also like your version of Mina's and Chanyeol's 'new beginning'!
P.S I love how you included Hasung. I would imagine Baek being inspired to be a doctor and he would begin his trainee days in that same hospital, and Hasung being his mentor. Wouldn't that be sweet♥
Usually, something really good might have its minus points too. I can't help but to feel very confused at some things.
For example: Mina. Baekhyun and Naeun first met 10 years ago, and by then Chanyeol is already an angel; meaning Mina is already in a coma by then. You mentioned that Chanyeol and Mina would've been in the same age right now, and Mina got into a coma when she was 19. So would she be at least 29 when they met again? And He turned EXO human to their physcial ages or what? I mean, if He turned Chanyeol back to the age when he died, does that mean she's 9 years older than him...... so I'm a little confused in that. Ehe
It's touching how the EXO members went against the rules and go fight for Naeun
(Plus they can showcase their powers, maximum level! XD) it seems that the mighty angels called EXO got something really dear to fight for. They did develop attatchments (no! Not the word I intended to use. Hate when that happens) with Naeun.
And how all 12 surrounded her in the end... oh dear God. It's heartbreaking, I tell you, heartbreaking! Especially with Sehun's and Baek's reactions; Sehun denies the truth for a while before it struck him hard and Baekhyun is too devastated to do anything. He was silent with tears unconsciously pouring down. In my opinion, that reaction is the most sad and painful, alongside with those kinds of crying when you lost your soulmate/parent. Props for you to describe the scene so well into words!
And the ending.... I really love endings like those. It's like a new beginning, you know? A new beginning which is still a mystery to the cast and the readers. I always wondered how would EXO do to pay the bills and stuff (and how they would crash BaekEun's honeymoon by secretly boarding into the plane those two would use, booking seats behind them just to yell 'Boo!' and 'Surprise!' when they're all on board to scare the hell out of them (and to piss Baek to the max haha). Idea courtesy to Xiu, Kai and Channie. Classic pranksters.)
Mind if I share a bit of my imagination with you? Yes? No? (Asking isn't really necessary since I'd share them anyways XD)
D.O would be a chef & eventually own his resto and Suho will be the manager, Xiumin will be the childish preschool teacher that always help the boys set up pranks while Chen would team up with the girls; sarcastically mocking Xiumin and the boys all the time.
I always imagined that some of the guys' powers are actually 'connected' with their human lives; like how Lay ends up being a doctor and Chanyeol is a firefighter.
Remind me of how stupid I was for not reading this earlier? I mean, I remember I stumbled upon this fic when it got featured last year and totally ignored it; simply because I thought 'the author wasn't creative enough to the point he/she named his/her fanfic over a song' (hahahaha please don't kill me!). I feel like facepalming right now.
The title really fit the story. This is basically about a girl who somehow went into a foreign world to meet her angel. Plus Baekhyun is from the group EXO and I don't know if EXO-KM is named after EXO Planet or the opposite, but basically EXO Planet is Baek's and EXO-K's world at that moment; thus the name 'Into Your World'. I feel that somehow you'd come up with a name similar to this even if 'Angel' wasn't released. From this day forward I at least learned a lesson; do not judge a book by its cover. Hahahaha
Cause seriously this story didn't match my judgement then. I won't comment on every single detail because it would be as long as a chaptered fanfic, flooding the box with maybe hundreds of comments. Oh, dear.
So I guess I'll just comment on things I remember most for now (this is a bad habit of mine. Every time my brain receives a lot of happenings, it gets overwhelming and I would sometimes miss the details I wanna talk about, but forgets about them and remember them again when I'm finished with my comments XD)
Since the latest chapters I read are the last ones, I think I'm going to start with them first.
The last chapters when Naeun was about to die made my eyes water. I don't know if it's because it's not heartbreaking enough, I was still reminiscing over EXO's hilarious antics (real life and in this story...), or I was just back from a fangirling session over Henry's mini-album and EXO's MuBank stage (there aint any bandanas on Chanyeol! Praise the Lord!)
Chapter 49: The first time ever, I've cried from reading a fanfic. It was beautiful I mean very, very, beautiful. I'm glad tht you made it to a happy ending. I hope you'll doing a great job in the future. And THANK YOU for writting this fanfic.
Chapter 49: I literally just read this in 3 hours about... It was sooo good! I cried a little and my heart hurt so bad but it was so good. I love that the stupid bully got taken to his rightful place and that yeollie got to me with Mina again~ ^^ I love your story! You should write a sequel. Lol jk I read your blog post and I understand completely. Hmm I just have so many things that want to say about the story! I won't though.. Haha I'll go read another one of your stories now! Bye and thanks for writing an awesome story!
Chapter 49: Author-nim!!! Thank you so much for creating such a lovely story. I almost cried when I was reading the past chapters. Anyways, fighting, author-nim! I hope you keep on making great stories.
Chapter 49: Ah!!! I'm done with this story n I love it!!! Whoop whoop (*o*)9 fighting n continue to write amazing story like this one. Urgh, I cried so many times in this story n my mum is like "Mei(I'm from Singapore n I'm chinese), u got to stop reading n rest ur eyes" but the story is just to amazing can't stop reading! ^_^ ur a great author, keep on writing more storys
Chapter 29: Omg this is the sadest thing I ever read(I think) but this chappie leave me cryin like a never ending rain, gosh, it so sad, I never though that chanyeol died this way...anyway, continuing the story(while crying) :'''}
Chapter 49: Omg! Just finished reading this story, and I'm nearly sobbing right here. Whatta beautiful story line!
Keep up your writing, dear Authornim ^^;;
화이팅!
Chapter 49: Authornim I don't know how to express my gratitude. Thank you so much for writing this wonderful story. Because of this my love for exo has been reborn. I really love your stories. fighting!! I promise to read the rest of your stories.
Chapter 30: *cries* the world is so chocolate fudge-ing cruel! D': Mina~! Chanyeol~!... NOOOOOO~! Do it, Naeun; do it for our Baekhyunnie oppa! <3.<3 (': You go, gurl! (; 붐! (BOOM!)
Chapter 3: i get so frustrated how people sometimes think baekhyun is younger than chanyeol... he's not! >:[ he's older than chanyeol by 6 months... ugh. T_T
I needed the music for each chapter to drown out my sobs.
I cried and was so happy and sad at the same time.
It's an absolutely beautifully written story and I am so glad I choose to read it. Thank you for making a wonderful story.
<3
Chapter 20: err, was that sehun suppose to never met luhan since he was six?
were at the age six they already went out to some place to buy bubble tea?
if they were, then that 'some place' supposed to be at heaven, right?
or am i missing somethin'?
err, kai is a teleporter , right?
why did he not teleport naeun back to earth?
emm, the angels (exo) were died, right?
then, did they die at a very young age?
because baekhyun were at err six (?) when he decided to help naeun, so does sehun, at hide n seek game, his last meeting w/ luhan, he was six,, but then they grew up be a teenagers....
is the died person grow up here?
#sorry for those unnecessary questions
#i'm so curious yeah..
#gotta read more
Chapter 49: Omg I FINISHED IT!! I DIDNT EVEN GO TO SCHOOL TODAY BECAUSE OF THIS FANFICS!!! IT WAS WORTH IT AUTHORNIM. ALL I WANT TO SAY IS THIS STORY IS AWESOME MUCH AND PERFECT AND OHMYGOD YOURE AMAZING AUTHORNIM! I LOGR YOUUUUU ♥♥
Chapter 37: Omg authornim ahhh tomorrow got school but still I cant sleeep because of this story ㅠㅠ AWESOME AMAZING DAEBAK WOW AND AMAZING AND I CANT DESCRIBE TJIS IN WORDS. OMG AHHH THANKS AUTHORNIM YOU MAKE MEEE HAAPPPPPY ^^
Chapter 49: Wow.This story is just amazing. The way you brought out the characters' emotions, actions and characteristics is just so amazing. You are really talented! :) I have read some other of your stories and they are really great! ^^
I will always support you and keep up the good work!
Chapter 49: Amazing, just amazing. From the beginning till the end you had me mesmerized. I felt so many things while reading this. Im really happy that I found this story! I will definately read the rest if your stories and keep supporting you, because you are a very talented writer. Keep up the amazing work!
Chapter 49: Waaahh.....This story was really amazing ;-) It made me feel a lot of emotions from the very start until the end. It made me laugh, cry,smile, and blush xD The ending that you made was so beautiful that it made me cry and I swear...It is one of the most beautiful endings that I have ever read :)
Hope you continue to make awesome stories ;) This is definitely one of my favorite stories ^.^
Chapter 49: Just finished reading this today. After a few months... :D
It's really beautiful. I really love it. :)))
Thanks for a great story muzikmaster ! :D
Didn't you have a story on how they died? I can't find it. T^T unless you didn't. Then I'm going crazy. Ahh I love this story so much! I love you! Good job
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