I read the first version of this and I was so confused lmao. I kept reading because I wanted to find out about Baekhyun's actions and Lisa. Now that you've started it again, I saw the first few paragraphs of the first chapter and I find it easier to understand. I find this version much better. I don't find anything wrong with the plot! Looking forward to reading this! ^^
Chapter 7: Was it love at the first sight for Baekhyun to OC? Or maybe he knew OC beforehand? Baekhyun seems to like OC a lot. I cant wait for more interaction between themmm. Thank you the update <3
Chapter 7: Baekhyun.. don't play with my heart like that, man.. There's only so much I can take. He is such a sweetheart, I swear. The amount of times my heart fluttered is enough to fill the deep blue sea. T-T I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR WRITING ❤
Chapter 7: AHHHHHHH SHE CONFESSED. THEY CONFESSED. OH MY GOSH I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. THANK YOU KAI FOR EXPOSING BAEKHYUN. Oh goodness my baby girl is about to join baek's squad i'm so happy for her i need more of this. This is soooooo gooooooood ❤
Chapter 7: This relationship is scaring me. This is the OC’s first time doing this and I think baek has done this many times before. I feel like she will become overwhelmed with everything because baek is the type to make “first moves” and their relationship will start moving a bit too fast pace I think for the OC. Or maybe Lisa will come into the picture. I’m not sure but I just want them to be okay.
And Kai is a qween in this story.
Chapter 7: THEY ARE SO CUTEEEEEEEE AND LOVELY I JUST;;;;; they way they confessed to each other make my heart beating fast, i can feel oc being nervous and shy but the urge to tell him that she likes baekhyun too is really something. I wish they ended together >< thankyou for updating author-nim lovee you always, take your time to write it’s really okkkk i will always wait and support you and your stories ><
Chapter 6: Awwww this chapter was so sweet ;; and it literally hit home for me once again, when the librarian made that snide comment about art and giving more prefrences to science student (because I too am an arts student and we get discriminated quite often) ;;
Lovely update ♡
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