I am really enjoying your story! It is so nice to have you back again. I hope you are doing well. I also hope that you update soon. Haha. Things are getting exciting...A pack Mate???...
Chapter 6: Boy, do I have words about this story so far. First off though, that last line "I watched her leave in that little toaster car with my heart in tow"...... Too cute for words. Ugh. On a more serious note, I have never related better to a character than I do to Sonja. You write her anxiety brilliantly. At first I was just like yes, girl, I feel you so much, but honestly? Kinda wanna cry too... But it's a good thing. Really love the two different povs. Also, Kai feeling super anxious before Sonja arrived to their date... He was feeling her anxiety, wasn't he? I liked that. Nice subtle touch. Anyway, I'm loving this story so far and I'm really looking forward to the rest of it. ((Your writing style is amazing by the way!)) <3
Chapter 5: Hello, Good evening!
I really liked the story .. and the POV idea.. i think im fine with either.. but i would always like to read both of POV!
even though i started reading it today.. i cant wait for the next update!
Hi, it's me again! Haha. How are you doing? I hope you are doing well. Your story has more of an original twist to it that is very nice. I look forward to seeing what happens next!! Take care!
Chapter 4: Oh! I hope you are feeling better. I am feeling under the weather as well. Take it easy and rest well. Thank you for the update. I will look forward to your next one as well. Hahaha.. No pressure though!
Chapter 4: I am really enjoying your story!! Thank you for writing it. I can relate to Sonja in so many ways. I too, have anxiety issues. It is very nice how much detail you put into how and why she does things. I am also enjoying learning about Kai/Jongin and his perspective of things and his feelings. Once again, thank you!
Chapter 3: ... am I the only one commenting because I could relate SO MUCH to Sonja? I may not have anxiety but she is always planning about her life and hates unexpected schedule that suddenly emerge in her life. Not to mention she is clumsy and she is easily startled. Istg I am Sonja most of the time. Even at the workplace.
Chapter 1: Ohh, I actually understand her a bit. She planned every single thing before going to work right. And she hates being watched while doing work because it seems like people are judging her and all.
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Btw I am quite curious about this story. Overall, chapter 1 is good. It is detailed. So, I will wait for another update! ^^
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