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Daron128 #1
Love this story ❤️❤️❤️
anneke329 #2
Chapter 15: This is the first story I've read that depicts anxiety like this...as someone with anxiety I love the way you don't sugarcoat it and how correct you portray it. Not only are the feelings of the main character real/life like, but how people are reacting to it is spot on. It's beautiful. Thank you.
alyfin
#3
Chapter 15: Minhee-ah even if you updated every single day I would still read this story from the beginning every single time. So don’t worry about how often you update or posting multiple parts at once.
I definitely know the feeling of not knowing where a story’s going. It’s a writers block like no other. I feel like your story is really unique with the way it covers the werewolf au and mental illness. You’ve done an amazing job of depicting anxiety so far but the werewolf au is always difficult. Like does your au work like lots of others that I’ve seen? (Biting, mate marks, a human being able to become a werewolf, etc etc) I think if you already have your au figured out then that will impact how the story progresses and ends. I would love if the story stayed more realistic and “real world”, which you’ve done so far, rather than being like a traditional au that’s pretty unrealistic. But I don’t want to influence any thoughts you already have :( I’ll love it no matter what!
On a lighter note, I’ve never seen “ah bup bup” written out before but it made me giggle because it’s so perfectly spot on.
....I made my comment too long again. Oops! xo
xaexo9 #4
Chapter 15: I just stumbled upon this story while looking for something interesting to read. And somehow, my interest was piqued because i super love werewolf AUs and discovering that this story is not your typical werewolf au made me immediately read it. So far, i could say that i'm slowly falling in love with this. I specifically like how you wrote every chapter and it allowed me to have a different perspective on several things mainly about anxiety. Definitely looking forward to how Jongin and Sonja's story progress on the next chapters. This story is becoming one of those i hold dearly into my heart. Thank you for writing this! I hope you have a good day. ❤
purplebxtch #5
Chapter 2: I’m already falling in love with this book...
AiiSoo #6
Chapter 15: I’ve only just managed to read this story from start until the current chapter now. Thank you for updating. If you didn’t update, I might have miss the opportunity to read a nicely-written story. I think I’ve subscribed this story not too long ago but somehow I didn’t start reading it right away.
Reading about what’s happening inside the head of a person with anxiety is new to me. I can feel Sonja anxiety just from reading it. I’m glad that she is finally starting to face her fears head on and try to get over it. The scenes of Jongin and Baekhyun getting scolded by their Luna is funny to me. And their sulks too. Hahaha. At the end of this chapter, she might’ve heard a telepathy from Jongin? I might be wrong though. So if that’s true, does that mean that their mate bond is getting stronger..?

Thank you again for updating. I’ll anticipate your future updates too..!
alexajjang
#7
Chapter 15: You're back!!!! I'm glad to know that you're alright ^^
I really miss this story a lot!

Hyesun is so mature and wise like Suho. Both are the perfect leaders for the pack. Sonja is like a little kid that need protection and patience and I'm sure Jongin will be perfect for her
96505726 #8
Chapter 15: Thank you for the new update
Faryoula
#9
Chapter 15: I actually care a lot about this story.I love the way it's written ,the characters personalities and a lot more.So don't get discouraged and thanks for the update.
ikran12 #10
Chapter 15: So she doesn’t remember what happened
Faryoula
#11
Chapter 14: I miss this story T_T
96505726 #12
Chapter 13: I feel like from this chapter a lot of good things will happen between Sonja and Kai and I'm looking foroward to it good job by the way your story is amazing
96505726 #13
Chapter 14: This story is really something . You did a great job in writing it especially this chapter
alyfin
#14
Chapter 14: Weekly updates are more than generous considering all you have on your plate! Kudos to you!! Also once Sonja recovers and realizes she's in Kai's bed, in Kai's room, in Kai's house where a bunch of other men live including her new boss??? She's gonna freak. I'm freaking out just thinking about it lol I'm excited to see how she handles it... And also how Baekhyun begs for her forgiveness and treats her as an employee to make up for everything. I think having him as a boss could be a really good thing for her (especially now that he knows Sonja is Kai's mate). He'll probably push her buttons and boundaries (and Kai's as a result), but hopefully this will really help her bloom and succeed. Loving this new dynamic Minhee-ah! xoxo
alexajjang
#15
Chapter 14: omg I know Jongin didn't want to hurt Sonja but he must learn to control himself! :(
cowboyzkdlin
#16
Chapter 2: Jongin with really dark brown hair is the superior colour on him. Since Sonja is human, for her things will take time
cowboyzkdlin
#17
Chapter 1: TBH i've always wanted to work in a cafe. i just love the atmosphere and the idea of drinks and snacks is so pleasing~ damn kai really out here introducing himself so quick lmao if someone did that to me in rl i would be freaked out. i deal with social anxiety
cowboyzkdlin
#18
i saw #slowburn and clicked
IM CRAVING ANGST SO BAD OOF
alyfin
#19
Chapter 13: Go Sonja go! I'm so proud of her!! Those thoughts she was having in the elevator about running from her anxiety rather than facing it head on...I feel like every person with anxiety has to have that moment before they can do anything to help themselves. It's awesome that she immediately went into action. She'll probably regret it when she walks in to face her fuming mate and her future boss (uncomfortable lol), but it's an important step in her development. I always feel like my anxiety masks my true personality. I feel like under her anxiety Sonja is quite feisty ? Wonderful as usual! Sonja makes me feel so much less alone. Thank you Minhee-ah ? PS, I will literally wait forever for updates. I would never abandon this story