Chapter 2: You have an interesting plot there. I love your writing. Looking forward to more development.

Chapter 2: Ohmaigod! This is so wow. I wasn't expecting the main reason the capture people with golden eyes but srsly? Immortality, huh?

Chapter 1: Whoaaa, this is clearly amazing! I don't why there's not a lot of comment here but babe this fic is so good. Gonna be one of top ten my fav kaisoo fic this week. Jongin's yellow eyes kinda of remind of Prince Wolfgang in king's maker which make me more excited to read this one. I can't believe i have just read this first chapter but y'know it feels that i watching a movie all this time. Lieutenant Do sounded so hot in my ears and i can't help but ti squel everytime i read em'. Oh thanks for the first chap. Gonna read the nxt one soon!

Wow seems interesting! Gonna read em’ soon=)

Good story>>>>

I cant wait to see what will happen next