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siemprekaisoo
#1
Chapter 14: Such a captivating story!! You can't help but get totally immersed in this dystopian world and its characters. And the kiss was brief but ever so sweet and touching!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Yaone_L #2
Chapter 14: I am curious as to what SE Minseok did which made him very sensitive. Also, Kenta's. And Kyungsoo falling deeper in live with Jongin. Hope he wont guard his heart too much like Jongdae's. Looking forward to next chapter.
olio_beesz
#3
Chapter 14: YESS!! MY BABIES IS FINALLY KISS ♥♥♥
olio_beesz
#4
Chapter 13: Aww, my minnie. I'm glad kyungsoo is there for jongin. I dont want my ships to suffer but yeah.. At least, they are tgt now, it shud be fine.
ArmyCaratExoL
#5
Chapter 13: Minnie is probably afraid that he won´t be able to do the necessary things to catch and end the Feng group if he has to deal with emotions at the same time. I really hope it works out, Dae and Minnie are both my biases sort of and I just want them to be happy
olio_beesz
#6
Chapter 12: aww my poor little thing minseokkie T-T. it must be so hurt and also tired for jongdae to go thru this all. i know Dae, i wish i can help you buddy but not only you too, i wish i call help all of you especially my kaisoo. i'm so grateful that finally kyungsoo meet jongin thou it kinda brief moment. hope i cam.see more.
Yaone_L #7
Chapter 11: I love Jongdae's frustration and Minseok's attempt to please Jongdae even if he hardly have any feelings for now. I am glad they stick with each other as they went on with their task. Bless Jongdae for not being able to resist being carried. Wahahaha.
Looking forward to Kyungsoo meeting up with Jongin next.
olio_beesz
#8
Chapter 11: Yeay i can't wait for kaisoo moments next but that doesnt say how i am disappointed with junmyeon. Idk whether i shud trust him now? I think jongdae is right thou, he is two-faced. But anywy just leave it there, i cant believe minseok actually know that jongdae ever confess to him! No he's confessing again, aww so sweet!! I love xiuchen ♥♥
ArmyCaratExoL
#9
Chapter 11: I seriously can´t figure Junmyeon out... is he good? is he bad?? is he just a selfish opportunist? Love the XiuChen^^ I really hope they will all be able to feel before the story ends :)
olio_beesz
#10
Chapter 10: ing finally!! Chanbaek is tgt. I mean i've been suffer watching the frustrating episode of chabvaek in denial. Fuhh..Now everything, i mean all of this, the mess, the whole action and now kyungsoo is in prison, baekhyun is hurt, and Kyu is half dead(?), junmyeon and his grandfather.. Srsly i didnt know anymore which sides is true? I bet this is hard for kyungsoo. Then what will happen next if he is in prison? How is jongin? My brain mess up. (╥﹏╥)
olio_beesz
#11
Chapter 9: It is frustrating– no, disappointing to know how junmyeon changed a lot. Where is the sense of humanity? They keep talking about all drugs blablabla but dont they know what they doing would harm of all the peoples there? Idk anymore. And it is also heartwarming how kyungsoo is missing our baby bear, kekekeke♥ i so in love with baekyeol here thou they were being complicated. Like i want to smack both of their head and kidnap one of them so that they will realise how it was like to have someone who always by ur side and the next sec, not anymore. But yeah, i can't wait for kyungsoo to be able to contact jongin's side. I miss their interaction already. Huhuhue. Lastly, thanks for the wonderful update, author! Gives u lots of love♥♥♥♥♥♥♥(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ(。’▽’。)♡
olio_beesz
#12
Chapter 8: It is seriously funny to see how chanbaek argue on stupid things and baekhyun keep on lead chanyeol being jealous but tbh, he is too. Nothing much about junmyeon and i'm glad kyungsoo have his time off from action mode. And xiuchen, aww my heart can't handle this couple. My heart aching for this two. And as for the festival, hope it can be happen soon. So that kyungsoo would meet the others too.
Yaone_L #13
Chapter 8: Yes, loving the short break given to Kyungsoo. He get to see what a normal life is if he was born in the city. Ooh, loving the interaction between Baekyol and Kyungsoo. Hope to see more of their friendship together. Thanks for the Xiuchen too. Hurray on Minseok making some effort.
olio_beesz
#14
Chapter 7: This story is great despite from the tension of slowburn it is. I didn't know why there is not a lot comment here when this story is so amazing!!♥♥
I love how you potrayed Jongin here. How he crave to see kyungsoo makes me heart goes melting. They can feel love. He can feel love. And i believe what xiumin felt toward jongdae is real too. Well everything feel so real. And i hope u dont get down for the lost of subscribers. U deserve the best. Really.

Anywy thanks for the lovely update
akakpovimaya #15
Chapter 7: I just love this story??? It's a little bit slow paced but I like..I was so happy that you updated. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you and your writing is amazing
olio_beesz
#16
Chapter 6: Omfg, u don't know how i'k excited when i read my notification today! Finally u updated. I feel that i was like watching movie while i'm reading this. There's a lot of action. I cant help myself but pity about xiuchen condition. Aaa, my babies. Wish there's more kaisoo moment. However it is frustrating to know what scientist have been doing. Tq for updating.
olio_beesz
#17
Chapter 5: Srsly this fic is gold! I love everything. I'm glad that Jian is dead. And i can see a little kaisoo moment there(i wish for more).
olio_beesz
#18
Chapter 4: Wow so many things happen in one chapter. I excited for next
woaini13 #19
Chapter 2: I like the way you right♥
olio_beesz
#20
Chapter 3: I really really really love this story so much! Gonna be one of my fav fic after this! Kaisoo in this is so heartwarming and aww poor my soo.