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wonpokemon
#1
Chapter 10: Hope you get in them last minute apps. Unfortunately not one by me. D; but it's okay I'll still.stick around to read and such!!! Lol I'm sure it's going to be a crazy ride!
elle4everZ
#2
Hello~
i have read your review and i would like to actually thank you for pointing out the places where i made errors and other mistakes. while i'm writing this i am currently doing a major revamp of Eleena just as you suggested and adding more greys to her. i don't know if i'll have her revamp done before friday but i will try my best to make it on friday, i've just got so much life right now and am slowly working through it all. i'm not technically asking for an extention but this is just a "i read what you said and am making progress with it".
thnx again for the review, i'm glad you liked some aspects of Eleena though~
jhopeslips
#3
Chapter 7: I may or may not be smiling st the sweet review you gave- anyway..heh thanks for the nice review And accepting Luna i’m glad you saw where I was trying to go with her! You should get into power rangers they’re pretty lit XD-
samasbananas
#4
Chapter 8: Nice soundtrack choice for the teaser, it really fits Marina's thought process lol
wonpokemon
#5
Chapter 10: Glad to.know you got more apps in!!!
MinRin04 #6
Chapter 6: Thank you so much for the nice review ! I'm so happy you liked Kat :D
nancy3
#7
wait is the deadline 26 or 16?
bbygrlolita
#8
Chapter 6: iM cryingGG the deadline is jan 16 and i jus got back to this story to start my app T-T
wonpokemon
#9
Oh crap. I never got around to this. But hope you get more apps in!!
-avarice
#10
Chapter 6: Thank you for the super nice review! I had fun reading it omg I'm glad you liked Halsey ^^ And you noticed a lot of things, too. I appreciate that a lot~ I'd spazz with you more but I'm kinda late for school now XD Ciao!
-avarice
#11
Chapter 10: i'm working on my app but i'm kinda lost atm @- @
i might figure it out by the deadline tho but like
she's not worth extending the deadline for OTL;;
hare-onna
#12
Chapter 10: still working on my app!!! i’ll hopefully get it done by the 16th
gotta get my brain juices going omg
queencivci
#13
Chapter 10: I'm still working on my app but it should be completed by the due date!! ^^
GhostingA
#14
Chapter 8: hahaha Y-files and Doctor What lols

ohhhh and here I thought it would force them to do something, such a nice scifi dimensional portal thingy XD

your writing styles lovely. definitely up my alley =P
mollygirl
#15
Chapter 6: Thank you so much for the nice review and for liking my character. I'm really looking forward towards this story.
-avarice
#16
Chapter 8: I REGRET PUTTING OFF TO READ THE TEASER

idk where to start but omg it's like a movie in my head like it's so beautifully described that i can think of it the moment i read it and it wasn't hard for me to read cause the words u used are all in my vocab (lol)

I'M CRYING Y-FILES AND DOCTOR WHAT this is gOLD

at first i thought the tp was for someone who was trapped in the music room cr bc they ran out of toilet paper. i'm kind of relieved that they were gonna use it for a prank

I KNEW IT BEFORE I CLICKED THE LINK IT WAS GONNA BE NOT TODAY OMG

i know it's part of ur author's note but "in which marina berker does not become a guardian of the aether" is sUCH a nic e follow-up *insert ok hand emoji 3x and fire emoji*
mollygirl
#17
Chapter 8: I felt I was watching a movie where the girl goes into the basement and I kept thinking 'Don't go down there!'. I like how Marina reacted though because I think a lot of people would react like that, just nope right out there. I freakin' love their equivalent of Doctor Who and X-Files. I really liked this teaser especially the part where you described the other side of the tear in space, your writing was great. You did a really amazing job! I can't wait to read more. 
taekjongjin
#18
Chapter 8: OMG I'm living for this teaser. It was so good.
Kinda sad, that marina and josh won't be in ... not even a cameo at soooome point?
Keep it up ! I have a very good feeling about this :)