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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 28: FFFFFFFFFS why is Carroll such an bbgfvh vg okay but I love the development uwu
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 28: OH YONGGUK
nothing you write is ever ty but please go to sleep now author-nim! o/
hzhfobsessed
#3
Chapter 27: Wdym if’s ty?? It suits jineul very well uwu esp the word preened
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 27: I like jineul’s style, it oddly suits him ouo
and man his axe LMAO
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 26: OOHOHOHOHOHOOHOHOHOHOOO

Idk what else to say LOL but the faery customs thing made me hjmgnejfnmrmggt like b o i be more politey
hzhfobsessed
#6
Chapter 25: GASP!!! I’m excite
jxxkwx
#7
Chapter 25: OOOF the Cheshire Cat and the White Rabbit are coming out to play hehe
I love the way you portrayed daehyun :3
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 24: GASPPP!!!! It begins!!

Also I love the way hyunwook talks LOL like I talk like that too when IMm being Uber dramatic and it sounds hella #solidarity
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 24: THE LAST ONE!!! I am INTRUIGÉD PLEASE TELL ME MORE
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 24: the king is such a mood tbh haha
he just cuts off chess pfft
hzhfobsessed
#11
Chapter 22: THINGS HEAT UPPPPP I want to watch what happens too ;;
jxxkwx
#12
Chapter 22: “Now, before you snort at the name”
Me: *snorts*
wonpilist
#13
Chapter 22: i just said lewis in the weirdest voice ever
hzhfobsessed
#14
Chapter 9: idk how to put this but the rel=nofollows still show up so i'm pissed at aff and here are the bare links:

longsword: http://flv.wfeng.net/uploadfile/gongfu/201208/tg4279202305031.jpg
pin 1: https://i.etsystatic.com/6092675/r/il/6bcb49/1632890891/il_794xN.1632890891_qpqw.jpg
pin backup: https://dee2fx0lhl024.cloudfront.net/auctions/images_lots/9B1DB6ECB29ACD5CEDF7AC8766FE96EA_pee01/1100158748_PREVIEW.JPG

and yes, his mother is from a vampire mafia lol
hzhfobsessed
#15
Chapter 9: Damn you’re picky LOL i’ll Fix up on a computer and tell you then
jxxkwx
#16
Chapter 9: I think I’ve got everything corrected o/
tell me if I missed anything ><
wonpilist
#17
Chapter 5: okay so because i can't see the pages uhhhhh what wonderland plotlines have been applied for
wonpilist
#18
Chapter 22: yo did you take down the rvws page ;;
hzhfobsessed
#19
Chapter 9: oh and if you need anyone for the other plotlines in gemini, i'm not against jae being changed lol....
hzhfobsessed
#20
Chapter 9: https://www.asianfanfics.com/blog_page/view/3256

and here's the sis

the changes are bold and italicized, but they were sort of hard to see so i added a blue highlight. might not have caught everything, though, but i should have changed everything.

again, if the links don't work, tell me :((((