Chapter 8: It's a good story...I loved our alot...UwU... but I'm not satisfied with the ending...I wanted king park chanyeol to be Able to live his life peacefully with his wife... Chanyeolllll T T
Chapter 8: Good story.
It has been stuck in mind the last three days and i couldn't sleep without finishing it tho i've cried my eyes out and I'm so sad it ended this way but the epilogue made up for the angst.
Sweet god i don't even know why I'm reading angst as it's surely not my favourite kind of story but i have to say you're good at writing.
The evolution of characters and events are at very good pace that i could understand everything going on between chanyeol and seolhwa.
It's just it has it own taste of.. I don't know maybe realism.
Anyway kudos to you i haven't read a well written fiction like this in a while. ❤
Chapter 8: It's really a beautiful story and I don't even know how to propely comment it. I've just fallen in love with Chanyeol's character in this fic and I'm so happy that they've got their happy ending even if it's their next life.
Chapter 8: This story is simlle yet fascinating me with the way its written. I have this kind sort of feeling that i cant ever be read my ultimate bias fanfic but here i am read a story with chanyeol as the first male role without any dissapointment or bad feeling ever. ♡
Chapter 8: This is mind blowing !!! So amazing.... at least in their present life no one wants to kill them. Their love story is very pure and cute. Loving each other with so much respect. This is a very beautifully written fics...
Chapter 8: One word: Mind blowing.
Usually I'll leave a lengthy comments on any stories that I've read. But for this one, I'm not sure why am I feeling lost about what to say. So just bear with my nonsense.
In my opinion, this story is well structured. I can tell that you do have talent in writing through every little detail that you leave. Most of the time, other beginner writer tend to insert details that unnecessary which kind of make the stories too compact. But, yours is different. It added some kind of special effects (it's really hard to explain with word). Annnddd, I also love how unexpected the turn of event. Like how Chanyeol end dying. I keep expecting that Chanyeol will never die like he has a supernatural power. (Cough *fire* cough) Though the epilogue is quite short, but I do find it okay because you're making the readers to solve the puzzle about what's coming. It's just that I hope you could make the ending a little bit specific to sum up the story in a better way.
«Basically, this story is worth reading. I do find it interesting. Sometimes, I try to claim that certain part of it are cliche but you prove it otherwise by including various details and plot twist making it interesting. Btw, congrats for being feature. Hope you could gain more readers.»
Chapter 8: i am kinda lost . so chanyeol is really dead . and reborn as a commoner . and their love was just meant to be wasted . kinda left me with empty feeling
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