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ackerwoman
#1
Chapter 3: Wait what? I'm gonna read that kneeling part again because my heart can't handle this
ackerwoman
#2
Chapter 3: Ohoo her heart rate increases and that indicates something.
ackerwoman
#3
Chapter 2: King Chanyeol is so thoughtful, my heart can't take it.
Doringo #4
I would live if I said I didn't cry
srygal
#5
Chapter 6: I dint realize the “crack” and read through everything only to question if the plot is actually leaning towards humor...
E_L_F13
#6
Chapter 8: im- i don’t even know what to say
noonimm
#7
Chapter 8: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1254407/8'>Epilogue</a></span>
Have to say that i’m glad i came back to read this.

Normally, i’m kind of person who seriously cannot enjoy any story that I have been spoiled (accidentally or not, especially if there is some issue with my ultm bias) but I AM GLAD I AM BACK TO THIS!

That *you know what* scene was really touched and hurt at the same time. I can felt all the pain and relief. Lastly, THANK YOU SO MUCH that they are happily together.
noonimm
#8
Chapter 6: .... and I though it was real until Jongdae came out
(blame my language skill, i didn't understand "Crack" correctly this time lol)
Rubyceliaa #9
PLEASEE READ THE COMMENTS!
I love the story I was hooked just from the title, the ending though... I just finished reading it and I’m sobbing at work don’t get me wrong I totally see why the author wanted that ending however I’m a er for happy endings and if that’s what you’re looking for just swipe away.. my respects for the author to have thought of a story like that and to choose to stick with that ending must’ve been hard.
FloatingFieeeee
#10
Chapter 8: I didn’t read the comments before starting this story and I’m speechless with the ending. Why... omg honestly at the back of my head, I was expecting it to be a sad ending but not that brutal thou T.T But really, is there a reason why he can’t be in the sunlight? I don’t think I recall any parts of the story that explained about that thing.
It not having them together T.T But I truly enjoyed the fluffs and romantic parts. Honestly I got goosebumps whenever it’s too good for my heart to handle. This is such an amazing story! At expected from you *wink*
Fairy_Exol #11
Chapter 3: Why the i read comment before reading the fic!! Now i Don't want to read this fic anymore.. I Don't like sad ending. Especially not in chanyeol fanfic coz he's my ing ultimate bias‍ TT
noonimm
#12
I should not read the comment before read the story ...... *mentally facepalm*
tonnettie
#13
Chapter 8: Brutal ending.
EJ-ARMYz
#14
Chapter 8: I can't believe chanyeol dead. Nahh, your stlry os amazing. Although i rarely read kingau and royalau. Love itt!!
Faizakarpuz
#15
Chapter 7: baekhyun has to kill that bastard
BeatBoxer
#16
Chapter 8: Uh I don't know what I just read. I'm honestly so disappointed with the ending, this story has so much potential and I really don't like sad endings:( Oh well, thank you for the good read.
Faizakarpuz
#17
Chapter 1: wow I'd like to read more
Plutonics #18
Chapter 6: Can I expect more of such chapters in your other fics.....:D
KimHyeJoo #19
Chapter 8: At least they’re together in another life...
Gstwln #20
Chapter 4: I expect something gonna happen there, but nah.. It's okay. I'm okay with that :))))


and hallow, I'm your new reader :)
thanks for writing