Chapter 6: Agh!!! This is so confusing. So were they a couple before? And why did wheein avoid hyejin when she obviously like her? Why? Why? WHYYYYY????
Sorry, i'm just really curious. Which is a good thing. Your story makes me want to look forward to ur update.
Chapter 5: WHO LEAVING WHO EXACTLY?!? I feel like wheepup was the one who left hyejin, and it might be because she loves hyejin more than a friend? While hyejin just cared about wheein as best friend. Oh no, my baby wheein, don't cry ;-;
I seriously love myunghee even more now. Of course judging from what wheein and hyejin had as a long time best friend could not compare. B-but, myunghee is just really funny and considerate. AAGG!!! SHES NOT EVEN REAL BUT I LIKE HER WITH WHEEIN NOW!!! HALP!!!
I love that everyone founds wheein adorable and will be well fitted with mamamoo. I wonder why? Huehueh
Dude, please update soon ;-;
I need to know why they're leaving each other. And myung hee, please come to jenju and make hyejing jealous~ muahahahahaha~
Chapter 4: In my opinion, Slowburns are so good when characters are well written. Good characterization makes it all, the plot of a story could be the most simple thing, but if the characters feel real and their interactions are interesting, then I'm sold.
So long wheein and hwasa feel real. I like how this is going. And I love that you choose to write about this, for a while I've been wondering if i'd ever see a fic w wheein as an artist and the rest as mamamoo.
Chapter 4: Even in writing I could feel the smile and happiness Hyejin felt the moment she saw Wheein. Their separation had to have been hard for both of them considering they were together probably 24/7.
I think for Hyejin her hectic schedule is what made it hard for her to keep contact with Wheein but she never stopped missing her and wanting to see her.
As for Wheein, it seems she took it the hardest out of both of them. Perhaps she felt abandoned, or maybe she regretted just a little not going with Hyejin and having the same dream. There also seems to be a sense of abandonment from Hyejin towards Wheein -- Wheein feels this.
I don't know what you mean about the formatting, it looks fine to me. This was a great chapter and I know the next update will be great as well.
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